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Note on the local calculation of decoherence of quantum superpositions in de Sitter spacetime

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Pith's one-line read This paper claims that a cosmological horizon in de Sitter spacetime decoheres a quantum spatial superposition by emitting entangling particles, with the gravitational rate fixed at $\Gamma_g=2m^2d^4/(15\pi^2L^5)$.

desk verdict Clean local derivation of scalar and EM decoherence in dS, but the claimed new gravitational coefficient rests on an unshown Weyl two-point normalization. read the letter →

arxiv 2501.00213 v1 pith:SWXUN7F5 submitted 2024-12-31 hep-th gr-qcquant-ph

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classification hep-thgr-qcquant-ph PACS 04.62.+v03.65.Yz
keywords decoherencedeSitterspacetimecosmologicalhorizonquantumsuperpositionentanglingparticlesgravitationalWeyltensorcorrelationfunctionUnruheffect
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The paper aims to establish that the decoherence of a quantum spatial superposition held at the center of de Sitter spacetime can be computed locally, from two-point correlation functions of quantum fields, instead of by tracking radiation into the cosmological horizon. Using the algebraic approach to quantum field theory on curved spacetime, the author derives the expected number of entangling particles emitted by the superposed object and evaluates it for a conformally coupled scalar field, the electromagnetic field, and linearized gravity. The scalar and photon rates agree with the equivalent picture of an accelerating observer in 5-dimensional Minkowski spacetime, where the Unruh thermal bath causes Ohmic friction. The new result is the gravitational case: the entangling graviton number is $\langle N\rangle = 2m^2d^4T/(15\pi^2L^5)$, which fixes the numerical coefficient of the gravitational decoherence rate for the first time. If correct, the calculation supplies a model-independent, local recipe for horizon-induced decoherence in spacetimes with a static Killing horizon.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing identity is $\langle N\rangle = \langle\Omega|[\hat{\phi}_{\mathrm{in}}(\rho_R-\rho_L)]^2|\Omega\rangle$, which equates the expected number of entangling particles to the vacuum variance of the 'in' radiation field smeared with the difference of the two source densities. This reduces the decoherence calculation to the local two-point correlation function of the quantum field. For gravity, the relevant two-point function is that of the electric part of the Weyl tensor, $E_{ab}=C_{acbd}t^ct^d$, whose de Sitter-invariant vacuum correlator is taken from the corrected expression in Appendix A. The final rates follow from the Fourier transforms of $\sinh^{-4}(\Delta\tau/2L)$ and $\sinh^{-6}(\Delta\tau/2L)$ evaluated at zero frequency.

What would settle it

Recompute the component $\langle C_{rtrt}C_{r't'r'}\rangle$ directly from the corrected Weyl two-point expression in Appendix A, or from the covariant graviton propagator, and check that it equals $-1/(16\pi^2L^6)\sinh^{-6}(\Delta\tau/2L)$; a different prefactor would change the claimed gravitational decoherence rate.

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Core claim

The paper's central claim is that the decoherence of quantum superpositions in de Sitter spacetime is governed by the local two-point correlation function of the quantum field. For a scalar field, the paper derives the identity $\langle N\rangle = \|\hat{K}\Delta(\rho_R-\rho_L)\|^2 = \langle\Omega|[\hat{\phi}_{\mathrm{in}}(\rho_R-\rho_L)]^2|\Omega\rangle$, so the number of entangling particles emitted into the cosmological horizon equals the vacuum variance of the smeared 'in' radiation field. Evaluating this in the de Sitter-invariant vacuum gives the rates $\Gamma_s = q^2d^2/(12\pi^2L^3)$ for scalar radiation, $\Gamma_e = q^2d^2/(6\pi^2L^3)$ for photons, and, for linearized gravity, $\Gamma_g = 2m^2d^4/(15\pi^2L^5)$. The scalar and electromagnetic results reproduce the rates found from an accelerating-observer model in 5-dimensional Minkowski spacetime, while the gravitational result determines the previously unknown numerical prefactor. Thus the paper establishes the local two-point function as the direct link between horizon thermodynamics and the loss of coherence.

Load-bearing premise

The gravitational result stands or falls on the corrected correlation function for curvature fluctuations in de Sitter space given in Appendix A; if its prefactors are wrong, the numerical coefficient $2/(15\pi^2)$ in the decoherence rate changes.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • A spatial superposition held at the center of de Sitter spacetime loses coherence at a constant rate in the observer's proper time, so the off-diagonal coherence decays as $\exp(-\frac{1}{2}\langle N\rangle)$ for each emission channel.
  • The scalar and photon rates ($\Gamma_s=q^2d^2/(12\pi^2L^3)$ and $\Gamma_e=q^2d^2/(6\pi^2L^3)$) match the accelerating-observer and Unruh-bath calculation, confirming that the local thermal environment is the physical source of the decoherence.
  • The gravitational rate $\Gamma_g=2m^2d^4/(15\pi^2L^5)$ is now determined with its numerical coefficient, so the prediction can be compared directly with matter-wave interferometry or with other horizon-decoherence estimates.
  • Because the entangling particle number is expressed through the local two-point function, the same algebraic derivation is expected to carry over to other static Killing horizons, including rotating black holes once adapted.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • If this local two-point formula is the right organizing principle, then any matter system in de Sitter spacetime should decohere at rates set by the same correlators; a controlled experiment with an accelerating frame might probe the scalar and photon scalings with $L$.
  • The corrected prefactor in Appendix A matters beyond decoherence: Eq. (5.2) provides a compact check point for any computation using the de Sitter Weyl two-point function, such as graviton noise or primordial fluctuation studies.
  • The $d^4$ growth of the gravitational rate with separation means large-separation interferometers are the most promising place to look for this effect, even though the $L^{-5}$ suppression makes it tiny for cosmological $L$.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The paper develops a local, algebraic-QFT derivation of DSW decoherence in the static patch of de Sitter spacetime. The expected number of entangling particles is expressed as the squared norm of a one-particle state built from the advanced-minus-retarded solution, which is then rewritten as an expectation value of the smeared in-field operator and hence as an integral of the local two-point function. The formalism is applied to a conformally coupled scalar, the electromagnetic field, and linearized gravity, yielding constant decoherence rates Γ_s = q²d²/(12π²L³), Γ_e = q²d²/(6π²L³), and Γ_g = 2m²d⁴/(15π²L⁵). The scalar and electromagnetic results match those of Ref. [1] for an accelerating observer, while the gravitational coefficient is claimed to be fixed for the first time.

Significance. The local reformulation of DSW decoherence is conceptually valuable, and the cross-check with Ref. [1] for the scalar and electromagnetic channels is a genuine strength. The derivation is parameter-free in the sense that no fitting is involved, and the coherent-state calculation is transparent. The new gravitational coefficient, however, inherits the overall normalization of the de Sitter Weyl two-point function displayed in Appendix A; because that normalization is asserted rather than derived or compared with the cited corrigendum, the central new claim is not yet fully supported. If the prefactor is confirmed, the result would be a useful step toward a local, first-principles gravitational decoherence rate in de Sitter.

major comments (1)
  1. [Appendix A, Eqs. (A.2)-(A.8); Sec. 5, Eq. (5.2)] The result Γ_g = 2m²d⁴/(15π²L⁵) scales linearly with the common prefactor 1/(4π²L⁶) of the coefficients D(i). The manuscript states that the expression in Ref. [24] is incorrect and that the error was fixed by Kouris, then adds that the author fixed an error in the prefactor of D(i), but it does not show the corrected derivation or compare with Kouris's corrigendum or with Ref. [25]. Without an independent check of this normalization, Eq. (5.2) — and hence the numerical coefficient 2/(15π²) — is not established. Please provide the derivation or a detailed comparison that pins down the prefactor.
minor comments (3)
  1. [Sec. 3, Eq. (3.13)] The displayed calculation of F(ω) is internally inconsistent: the second line reduces to ω/(πL²)(1+L²ω²)/(1-e^{-2πLω}) rather than the quoted third line, which has an extra 1/6 factor. The subsequent ω→0 limit used in Eq. (3.14) is correct, so the final scalar rate is unaffected, but the intermediate expression should be corrected or the limit derived directly.
  2. [Secs. 2 and 3] The text first states that a massive conformally coupled scalar is considered because the massless minimally coupled scalar lacks a conformally invariant vacuum, but Sec. 3 then computes the massless conformally coupled scalar. This is confusing; the massless conformal scalar does admit the de Sitter-invariant vacuum, so the initial rationale should be rephrased.
  3. [Sec. 2 and Conclusion] The claim that the result is model-independent is overstated: the derivation still assumes a c-number source and the specific conformal coupling for the scalar, and the gravitational formula is imported from Ref. [16]. The correct statement is that the result is independent of the interaction Hamiltonian, rather than fully model-independent.

Circularity Check

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No circularity: the entangling-particle numbers follow from coherent-state algebra and imported two-point functions; the Appendix A prefactor correction is an unshown external input, not a circular step.

full rationale

The derivation is not circular. Section 2 derives Eq. 2.20, ⟨N⟩ = ⟨Ω|[φ̂in(ρR−ρL)]²|Ω⟩, from the coherent-state overlap formula (Eqs. 2.13–2.19), and Eq. 2.27 then relates ⟨N⟩ to the local two-point function; this is a standard theorem about coherent states, not an assumed conclusion. The scalar and electromagnetic rates (Eqs. 3.15 and 4.10) follow by Fourier-transforming established two-point functions from Refs. [20,21] and [22,23]. The gravitational rate Eq. 5.4 follows algebraically from Eq. 5.1 (from Ref. [16]), the Weyl two-point Eq. 5.2, and the Fourier transform Eq. 5.3; checking the Appendix A D(i)Ω(i) sum reproduces Eq. 5.2. The one load-bearing imported item is the Weyl prefactor: Appendix A says 'the original expression presented in [24] is not the correct one' and 'we have fixed an error in the prefactor of D(i)' without displaying the corrected derivation. That is a transparency/verification limitation—an error in that prefactor would rescale Γg linearly—but it is an external literature input, not a fitted parameter, and no equation reduces to its own output. The only self-citation, Ref. [14], is unrelated to the dS calculation. Score 1 reflects the unshown prefactor derivation, not circularity.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 4 assumptions · 0 invented entities

No free parameters are fitted to data; q, m, d, T are physical parameters of the setup and L is the de Sitter radius. All correlation functions are imported from prior literature as standard inputs. The only invented-entity-like element is the corrected Weyl prefactor, which is presented as a correction to a cited result rather than a new entity. The central claim rests on the correctness of these imported correlation functions and on the formulas from Ref. [16].

assumptions (4)
  • domain assumption Existence and two-point function of the dS-invariant conformal vacuum for the conformally coupled scalar field.
    Used in Section 3, Eq. (3.5), quoted from Refs. [20,21]. Assumes the de Sitter invariant vacuum is the correct 'in' state for the radiation field.
  • domain assumption Electromagnetic two-point function in de Sitter spacetime from Refs. [22,23].
    Used in Section 4, Eq. (4.2). The computation of the entangling photon number rests on this input.
  • domain assumption Weyl tensor two-point function in de Sitter with corrected prefactors.
    Used in Section 5 and Appendix A. The paper modifies the prefactors of the expression from Ref. [24]; the correction is not derived, only stated. This is the main unproven input for the gravitational coefficient.
  • domain assumption Formula for the entangling graviton number in terms of the Weyl two-point function from Ref. [16].
    Used in Section 5, Eq. (5.1). The paper does not derive this formula; it is taken from the DSW local description.

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We study the decoherence effect of quantum superposition in de Sitter (dS) spacetime due to the presence of the cosmological horizon. Using the algebraic approach of quantum field theory on curved spacetime, we derive the precise expression for the expected number of entangling particles in the scalar field case. This expression establishes the relation between the decoherence and the local two-point correlation function. Specifically, we analyze the quantum superposition Gendankenexperiment performed by a local observer at the center of dS spacetime. We compute the entangling particle numbers in scalar field, electromagnetic field, and gravitational field scenarios. It is demonstrated that the quantum spatial superposition state can be decohered by emitting entangling particles into the cosmological horizon. Our setup is equivalent to an accelerating observer in 5-dimensional Minkowski spacetime. The results for the scalar and electromagnetic cases are consistent with those obtained in Ref.[1], which investigated the decoherence effect from the perspective of an accelerating observer in Minkovski spacetime. However, our result fixes the numerical prefactor of the gravitational decoherence.

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