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Imperfect Axions

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Pith's one-line read A simplified Pati-Salam model with gauged flavour symmetry produces an accidental, high-quality Peccei-Quinn symmetry, predicting a heavy axion and light anomalons.

desk verdict Useful review half, promissory model half – Table 1 has a real center-charge mismatch that breaks the anomaly-cancellation claim as written. read the letter →

arxiv 2505.07122 v2 pith:RDJVEFUF submitted 2025-05-11 hep-ph

Luca Di Luzio This is my paper · ORCID
classification hep-ph
keywords QCDaxionstrongCPproblemPeccei-QuinnsymmetryPQqualitygrandunifiedtheoriesflavoranomalonsaxion-mediatedforces
topics Dark MatterThe Strong CP Problem
open problems Dark Matter
verification ladder T0 review T1 audit T2 compute T3 formal

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A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.

The reading

The axion solution to the strong CP problem rests on a global Peccei-Quinn (PQ) symmetry that quantum-gravity effects are expected to break, an issue known as the PQ quality problem. This paper argues that a well-motivated gauge structure can make the PQ symmetry accidental and automatically high-quality: in a simplified Pati-Salam model (a left-right symmetric grand unified extension of the Standard Model) with an additional gauged flavour symmetry, an exact $U(1)_{\mathrm{PQ}}$ emerges from the gauge charges, and higher-dimensional breaking operators are forbidden. If correct, the axion can solve strong CP without ad hoc discrete symmetries, and the model makes concrete, testable predictions: an axion mass in three windows, including $m_a \gtrsim 0.01$ eV for the high-quality post-inflationary case, plus parametrically light anomalons that behave as dark radiation or dark matter. The paper also shows how CP violation beyond the Standard Model and PQ breaking generate scalar axion-nucleon couplings, turning axion-mediated forces into a probe of these 'imperfect' axion effects.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing object is the accidental $U(1)_{\mathrm{PQ}}$ generated by the combination of the Pati-Salam gauge group $G_{\mathrm{PS}} = SU(4)_{\mathrm{PS}} \times SU(2)_L \times SU(2)_R$ and the gauged flavour group $SU(3)_{f_R}$, together with the $Z_4 \times Z_3$ centre charges listed in Table 1. The anomalons $\Psi_R$ are required for anomaly cancellation and stay massless at the renormalizable level precisely because of the accidental PQ symmetry; non-renormalizable operators lift their masses. The scalars $\Phi$, $\Sigma$ and $\Delta$ generate fermion masses and mixings, while $\chi$ breaks $U(1)_{B-L}$ and the accidental PQ symmetry at high energy, and $\xi$ is an auxiliary real scalar needed to make the accidental PQ phase possible.

What would settle it

Enumerate all gauge-invariant operators of dimension $d \le 9$ that carry PQ charge and are built from the Table 1 fields; if any one of them is invariant under $G_{\mathrm{PS}} \times SU(3)_{f_R} \times Z_4 \times Z_3$ and involves a large VEV of $\chi$, $\Phi$, $\Sigma$ or $\Delta$, then the accidental symmetry is not protected at the level required by Eq.~(3), and the $m_a \gtrsim 0.01$ eV high-quality window is falsified.

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Extended reading notes

Core claim

The paper's central claim is that the Peccei-Quinn symmetry does not have to be imposed or protected by ad hoc discrete symmetries: in a simplified Pati-Salam model with gauge group $G_{\mathrm{PS}} \times SU(3)_{f_R}$ and the field content of Table 1, the renormalizable Lagrangian has an exact accidental $U(1)_{\mathrm{PQ}}$, and the same gauge structure forbids the higher-dimensional operators that would break it through the large VEVs of $\chi$, $\Phi$, $\Sigma$ and $\Delta$. The model is reported to reproduce the SM flavour structure while predicting three axion mass windows, the high-quality post-inflationary case requiring $m_a \gtrsim 0.01\ \mathrm{eV}$. The anomalon fermions that cancel the $SU(3)_{f_R}$ anomaly are massless at the renormalizable level; their masses are generated by non-renormalizable operators, making them parametrically light---sub-eV dark radiation in the high-quality regime, or keV-scale dark matter for intermediate axion decay constants.

Load-bearing premise

The load-bearing premise is that the charges in Table 1 leave an exact accidental $U(1)_{\mathrm{PQ}}$ at the renormalizable level and that no higher-dimensional operator built from the large VEVs of $\chi$, $\Phi$, $\Sigma$ or $\Delta$ breaks it, because the predicted high-quality mass window and the anomalon masses both collapse if such an operator exists.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The QCD axion in the high-quality post-inflationary regime must be relatively heavy, $m_a \gtrsim 0.01$ eV, moving the experimental target away from the classic ultralight window and into the range where next-generation axion experiments can search.
  • Anomalons are predicted to be parametrically light: sub-eV masses in the high-quality regime add to dark radiation, while keV masses for intermediate axion decay constants make them a dark-matter candidate.
  • Because the same gauge charges that protect the PQ symmetry also reproduce the SM fermion masses and mixings, the model ties the flavour puzzle to the strong CP problem and predicts correlated signatures in both sectors.
  • Any CP-violating or PQ-breaking operator that shifts the axion VEV generates a scalar axion-nucleon coupling, so searches for axion-mediated monopole-dipole forces become a sensitive low-energy probe of new CPV sources.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • A natural extension is to compute the anomalon contribution to the relativistic energy density $N_{\rm eff}$ in the high-quality regime; a future detection of extra radiation could indirectly probe the UV scale that protects the PQ symmetry.
  • The same gauge-protection template could be applied to other global symmetries, such as baryon or lepton number, suggesting a general mechanism for keeping approximate symmetries exact against Planck-scale effects.
  • If the heavy-axion window is confirmed, the flavour gauge bosons associated with the gauged $SU(3)_{f_R}$ may appear at accessible scales and produce flavour-violating signals complementary to the axion prediction.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The manuscript is a proceedings contribution on two ways in which the QCD axion solution can be 'imperfect': new CP-violating sources that shift the axion VEV and induce scalar axion-nucleon couplings, and explicit PQ breaking that underlies the quality problem. Sections 2–4 survey the standard estimates for θ_eff from CKM (Eq. 2), from CPV four-quark operators (Eq. 4), the resulting scalar axion-nucleon coupling (Eq. 6), and the induced monopole-dipole forces, with Fig. 1 placing these in the experimental parameter space. Sections 5–6 then advocate an accidental U(1)_PQ from GUT and flavor gauge symmetries and summarize a Pati–Salam × SU(3)_fR construction (Table 1) whose claimed predictions are shown in Fig. 2: three axion mass windows, the heaviest (ma ≳ 0.01 eV, labelled 'high-quality PQ') for post-inflationary PQ breaking, plus parametrically light anomalons. The conclusion repeats the axion-mass prediction as ma ≳ 0.1 eV, which does not agree with Section 6.

Significance. Were the construction of Section 6 fully established, the paper would present a significant step: an accidental, EFT-protected U(1)_PQ emerging from a gauge structure tied to flavor and unification, without ad hoc discrete symmetries, and with testable axion mass windows and anomalon signatures. The review material in Sections 2–4 is also useful, and the central estimates in Eqs. (2), (4), and (6) are standard and carefully attributed. The paper's own contribution, however, is not self-contained: the model's accidentality, flavor fits, and phenomenology are delegated to Ref. 27, and the only self-contained model statement, Table 1, contains an internal inconsistency in the Ψ_R representation that undermines the advertised anomaly cancellation. These issues must be fixed before the central claim can be assessed.

major comments (3)
  1. [Section 6, Table 1] In Table 1 the anomalon Ψ_R is listed as a 3 of SU(3)_fR with Z3 charge e^{4πi/3} = ω^2. Since the Z3 column is the center of SU(3)_fR, a fundamental 3 carries center charge ω, while only the anti-fundamental \bar{3} carries ω^2. The assignment is therefore internally inconsistent. If the table is read literally, the SU(3)_fR^3 anomaly does not cancel: Q_R is a right-handed 3 with GPS multiplicity 4×2 = 8, contributing −8 A(3), and the eight Ψ_R generations, each a right-handed 3 with GPS multiplicity 1, contribute another −8 A(3), giving total −16 A(3), whereas the text states that Ψ_R was introduced precisely to cancel this anomaly. If Ψ_R is instead a \bar{3}, the Z3 column is consistent and the anomaly cancels (−8 from Q_R, +8 from the eight Ψ_R), but then the SU(3)_fR entry in Table 1 is wrong. Either way, the charge assignment as printed cannot support the claimed accidental U(1)_PQ.
  2. [Section 7 vs Section 6 and Fig. 2] The final sentence of Section 7 states that the high-quality PQ solution predicts ma ≳ 0.1 eV, whereas the Section 6 bullet list and the Fig. 2 caption both place the high-quality post-inflationary window at ma ≳ 0.01 eV. This is not a cosmetic difference: the location of the predicted mass window is one of the paper's main quantitative claims. The text must be made consistent and the correct threshold clearly identified.
  3. [Section 6] The central model claims—that the field content of Table 1 leaves an exact accidental U(1)_PQ at the renormalizable level, that this symmetry is not ruined by higher-dimensional operators involving the VEVs of χ, Φ, Σ, and Δ, that the SM flavor structure is reproduced, and that the anomalon mass and ΔN_eff predictions follow—are not derived in this manuscript; the text refers to Ref. 27 for details and then presents the results as established. In particular, no scalar potential is given and no explicit check is shown that all PQ-breaking operators are forbidden to the required order. As a result, the reader cannot independently verify the paper's main new claim from the material presented. For a journal submission, this delegation needs to be replaced or substantially supplemented.
minor comments (4)
  1. [Footnote after Section 2] The footnote marker appears in the text as 'aIncidentally' with the footnote text attached directly to the word; the footnote should be properly marked and separated.
  2. [Table 1 caption] The caption states that the exotic fermions are 'highlighted in light gray', but the table as rendered shows no gray shading; the formatting should be corrected so that the intended highlighting is visible.
  3. [References] Ref. 27 is cited as an arXiv preprint without a publication status; if a journal version exists, the reference should be updated.
  4. [Section 6, first bullet] The phrase 'we showed' in the first bullet refers to results that appear only in Ref. 27; the attribution should be made explicit in the text so that the reader knows which claims are demonstrated here and which are taken from the companion paper.

Circularity Check

2 steps flagged · score 4.0 of 10

The new-model section's central PQ-quality claim and axion mass windows are delegated to the author's own Refs. 23 and 27; no equation-level reduction of 'prediction' to 'input' is found elsewhere.

  1. self citation load bearing [Section 6, immediately after Table 1 (main results paragraph)]
    "While we refer the reader to 27 for the details, we summarize here the main results: • We analyzed the model’s ability to address the PQ quality problem and we showed that it can non-trivially reproduce the SM flavor structure. • The main predictions of the model, regarding axion phenomenology, are summarized in Fig. 2, where three distinct axion mass windows are identified:"

    This is the only part of the paper that presents the new Pati-Salam model, and the claimed PQ-quality solution plus the predicted mass windows (including ma >= 0.01 eV for high-quality PQ) are explicitly not derived here. The reader is sent to Ref. 27 (Di Luzio, Landini, Mescia, Susic, arXiv:2503.16648), a companion paper co-authored by the present author. No equation in this text connects the Table 1 charge assignments to the d>9 operator suppression of Eq. (3) or to the quoted axion mass windows. As presented, the load-bearing evidence for the central new claim is a self-citation rather than a self-contained derivation, so the derivation chain stops at the author's own unpublished companion work.

  2. self citation load bearing [Section 5, paragraph beginning 'A possible strategy...']
    "A possible strategy, relying on the interplay between GUT and flavor gauge symmetries, was put forth in Ref. 23, b based on the gauge group SO(10) × SU(3)f, where SU(3) f denotes the flavor group of SO(10), in which the three SM families (plus sterile neutrinos) are embedded into a (16, 3) of SO(10)× SU(3)f. In this model, the accidental U(1) PQ arises from the interplay of the SO(10) and SU(3)f symmetries, which furthermore forbid dangerous PQ-breaking effective operators involving large-scale VEVs, thus providing a solution to the PQ quality problem."

    The original strategy and its asserted PQ-protection mechanism are attributed to Ref. 23, which is the present author's own JHEP 2020 paper. The text takes the existence of the accidental U(1)PQ and the forbidding of dangerous operators as properties of 'this model' without giving an independent derivation or an external machine-checked proof. Because the author is the source of the ansatz, the chain of authority for the model's defining feature is self-referential. This is not definitional circularity, but it is load-bearing self-citation: the new-model section in this paper trusts Ref. 23 for the premise on which all subsequent PQ-quality claims rest.

full rationale

Sections 2-4 are a review built on external inputs (jCKM, Lambda_QCD, Lambda_CPV, Vafa-Witten, Moody-Wilczek, and other prior work) and contain no fitted parameter that is later renamed a prediction; those parts are not circular. The circularity concern is concentrated in Sections 5-6. The paper's strongest new claim--that GPS x SU(3)_{fR} with Table 1 fields gives an accidental, EFT-protected U(1)PQ and hence ma >= 0.01 eV in the high-quality post-inflationary case--is not derived in this manuscript. The text explicitly defers 'the details' to Ref. 27, co-authored by Di Luzio, and the original SO(10) construction is taken from Ref. 23, also by Di Luzio. Thus the central claim is supported by a self-citation chain rather than by equations present in this paper. There is no exhibited reduction of Eq. (3) to an input that was fitted, and no 'prediction' that is identical by definition to a parameter of the model within this text; hence the score is 4 rather than 6 or higher. The apparent inconsistency in Table 1's Z3 assignment for Psi_R (center charge of a 3 versus \bar{3}) is a correctness/support issue, not itself a circularity. If Ref. 27 contains an independent, checkable derivation, the self-citation would be acceptable support and the score would drop; on the face of this manuscript, however, the derivation chain is incomplete.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 6 assumptions · 1 invented entities

The paper performs no parameter fits; the numbers in Eqs. (2)-(4) and (6) are NDA estimates with inputs from the cited literature (j_CKM, Lambda_QCD, Lambda_CPV, nuclear matrix elements). The model-dependent predictions in Section 6 rest on the companion paper Ref. 27, whose field content and assumptions are listed here as axioms. The only invented entity is the anomalon sector, which exists to cancel flavor anomalies and gives a falsifiable cosmological handle.

assumptions (6)
  • standard math The Vafa-Witten theorem ensures the axion VEV relaxes to zero for a positive-definite path integral measure.
    Invoked in Section 2 to justify theta_eff = 0 in pure QCD; the text itself notes it does not apply to weak interactions.
  • domain assumption Naive dimensional analysis gives the size of theta_eff^(SM) and of PQ-breaking operators.
    Eqs. (2) and (3) are NDA estimates with order-one coefficients; the text relies on them to set benchmarks such as d > 9.
  • domain assumption A four-quark CPV operator O_CPV induces a tadpole with correlator K' ~ Lambda_QCD^6 / Lambda_CPV^2.
    Used in Eq. (4); it is an NDA estimate of the correlator, not derived in this text.
  • domain assumption The scalar axion-nucleon coupling is set by the chiral Lagrangian relation in Eq. (6).
    Adopted from Refs. 8, 9, 10, 11, 12; no calculation is shown in this contribution.
  • ad hoc to paper The field content of Table 1 yields an accidental U(1)PQ protected at the EFT level.
    This is the model assumption summarized in Section 6 and Table 1; all quantitative support is in the companion paper Ref. 27, and the text gives no independent derivation.
  • domain assumption Gauging only SU(3)_fR of the flavor symmetry avoids relating flavor and electroweak scales.
    Design choice stated in Section 6; motivates why SU(3)_fL is not gauged.
invented entities (1)
  • Anomalon fermions Psi_R independent evidence
    purpose: Cancel the SU(3)_fR^3 gauge anomaly and remain massless at the renormalizable level; their masses are lifted by non-renormalizable operators, leading to sub-eV or keV-scale states.
    The paper predicts sub-eV anomalons contribute to dark radiation and are constrained by Delta Neff from Planck 2018, giving a falsifiable handle via future CMB measurements. The spectrum itself is computed in Ref. 27, not in this text.

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In this contribution, I'll discuss two classes of effects--additional sources of CP violation and PQ breaking--that offer a slightly different take on axion physics. Both are tied to the idea that the axion solution to the strong CP problem might not be exact, hence the title ``Imperfect Axions''.

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