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In an EFT of gravity, the fraction of primordial black holes that spin up to near-extremality during Hawking evaporation stays essentially the same as in GR (24.6–24.9% vs 24.7%), but the survivors carry order-of-magnitude stronger near-hor

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load-bearing objection A near-null result on the GR spin-up fraction, but the invariance is an artifact of a hand-set ansatz for the emission probability; worth refereeing as an exploratory study, not as a definitive claim. the 3 major comments →

arxiv 2602.21923 v2 pith:RWFOVULB submitted 2026-02-25 gr-qc hep-th

Stochastic Evolution of Primordial Black Holes to near-extremality in EFTs of Gravity

Soham Acharya , Shuvayu Roy , Sudipta Sarkar This is my paper
classification gr-qc hep-th MSC 83C5783C4783C75
keywords primordial black holesHawking evaporationeffective field theory of gravitynear-extremal Kerr black holesbiased random walktidal forcesdark matterhigher-derivative corrections
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This paper asks whether primordial black holes (PBHs) can still survive as dark matter candidates when gravity is modified by higher-derivative corrections. It shows that modelling Hawking radiation as a biased random walk in an EFT of gravity leaves the fraction of PBHs that spin up to near-extremality essentially unchanged from general relativity: about 24.6–24.9% versus 24.7% in GR. The corrected theories do, however, make the near-horizon tidal forces acting on those survivors about an order of magnitude larger than for a Kerr black hole. The authors argue that this enhanced tidal field could be observable in future gravitational-wave signals, making near-extremal spinning PBHs testable even if they are not ruled out.

Core claim

The paper's central claim is that EFT corrections to gravity do not spoil the Hawking-evaporation spin-up mechanism that lets a substantial fraction of low-mass PBHs approach near-extremality and survive to the present epoch. Running an ensemble of 10^6 initially non-rotating PBHs through stochastic evaporation with EFT-modified temperature and emission probabilities, the fraction ending at χ=0.99 is 24.6–24.9%, nearly identical to the 24.7% in GR. At the same time, evaluating the Weyl tensor near the horizon for a representative survivor (χ=0.99, M≈1.3 M_Pl) yields a tidal enhancement δC≈9–12 relative to Kerr, which grows as the black hole approaches extremality. Hence EFT corrections chang

What carries the argument

The argument runs on a biased random walk for the black hole's angular momentum. Each photon emission changes J by ±1, with spin-up probability P_up(χ)=1/2 − (1+C_EFT)χ + (1/2+C_EFT)χ|χ|, where C_EFT encodes the EFT corrections (from temperature, angular velocity, and greybody factors) in terms of the couplings η, λ, and λ̃. The EFT-corrected Hawking temperature T_EFT(χ) sets the mass loss per step. The population fraction reaching χ_max=0.99 is computed from 10^6 trajectories; the near-horizon tidal estimate uses the scaling C_{ρA ρB} ~ T^{γ−2}, with γ taken from the EFT extremal analysis. The key object is the effective coefficient C_EFT that biases the random walk; it is built from the sa

Load-bearing premise

The entire calculation leans on a parametrized guess for how EFT corrections alter the photon emission probabilities (the greybody factor), with a free coefficient set to −1 for convenience; if the real EFT greybody factors differ, the 24.6–24.9% survival fraction could shift.

What would settle it

Compute the greybody factors for photons in the EFT-corrected Kerr geometry (solving the perturbation equations for the corrected metric) and rerun the biased random walk; if the fraction reaching χ=0.99 moves by more than a few percent away from 24.6–24.9%, the paper's central claim fails. Alternatively, a direct numerical evaluation of the Weyl tensor near the horizon at χ=0.99 in the EFT metric would test the predicted δC≈9–12.

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If this is right

  • A sizable fraction (~25%) of initially Schwarzschild PBHs can reach near-extremal spin before evaporation completes, in both GR and EFT gravity, keeping the spin-up survival mechanism viable.
  • EFT corrections amplify near-horizon tidal forces by roughly an order of magnitude (δC≈9–12) at χ≈0.99, with the enhancement diverging as extremality is approached.
  • Such near-extremal EFT black holes are either unstable (large tides disrupt infalling observers) or strongly depart from GR, so they are not just Kerr-like relics.
  • If these PBHs exist, the tidal effects may be visible in future gravitational-wave observatories, offering a direct probe of both PBH dark matter and the EFT breakdown.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The 24.6–24.9% figure rests on an assumed form for the EFT greybody factor; a first-principles computation of those greybody factors and a re-run of the random walk would either confirm or overturn it.
  • Because the free coefficient C0 was set to −1 for convenience, the spin-up fraction could bracket differently under other choices; varying C0 within its allowed range would give a sense of how robust the survival fraction is.
  • The analysis stops at χ=0.99; extending the evolution to the true EFT-corrected extremality bound (once known) would likely lower the fraction, so the 24.6–24.9% should be read as an upper bound on near-extremal survival.
  • If the large tidal forces destabilize these PBHs before they reach extremality, the population might instead source a stochastic gravitational-wave background, turning the same mechanism into an observationally distinct signature.

Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

3 major / 6 minor

Summary. The paper models the stochastic Hawking-evaporation evolution of a population of primordial black holes (PBHs) in an effective field theory (EFT) of gravity with R^3, C^2, and C C~ corrections. Building on the biased-random-walk framework of Taylor et al. [11], the authors simulate 10^6 trajectories starting from Schwarzschild black holes of mass M0=10 M_Pl and J=0. Using a parametrized emission probability with an undetermined coefficient C0 (set to -1 so that the GR limit reproduces [11]), they find that 24.6--24.9% of trajectories reach the near-extremal cutoff χ=0.99, compared with 24.7% in GR (Section III). They further estimate, via Eq. (8), that EFT corrections enhance the near-horizon Weyl tidal components by a factor δC ~ 9--12 relative to Kerr at χ=0.99 and M≈1.3 M_Pl, and argue this may be observable. The paper concludes that EFT corrections neither rescue nor destroy the Hawking spin-up survival mechanism but endow survivor PBHs with significantly stronger near-horizon tides.

Significance. If the central numerical claim is robust, the paper establishes an interesting result: the Hawking-radiation spin-up mechanism for PBH dark matter is largely insensitive to the leading higher-derivative corrections, while the accompanying tidal amplification is potentially dramatic. The authors are commendably transparent about the main limitation—the EFT dependence of the greybody factor is unavailable—and the simulation framework is clearly described and reproducible in structure. The parameter-space scan over the allowed EFT couplings is systematic, and the authors take care to exclude regions where the EFT expansion breaks down. However, the central invariance claim is currently an output of a partly guessed emission-probability ansatz, not of a derived EFT prediction, and the tidal enhancement estimate relies on exponents computed at exact extremality. As such, the paper makes a plausible case but does not yet provide a fully grounded quantitative prediction.

major comments (3)
  1. [Section II, Eq. (6) / App. B, Eq. (B5)] The stochastic evolution is driven entirely by the emission probability in Eq. (6) / Eq. (B5). The paper states in Sec. II that "the precise dependence of the greybody factor on the black hole spin χ and radiation frequency remains unavailable," and in App. B that C0 is set to -1 "for our convenience" to reproduce the GR model of Ref. [11]. Consequently, the 24.6--24.9% near-extremal fraction quoted in Sec. III is an output of this parametrization, not of an EFT calculation. Because the fraction is controlled by the last few emissions near χ=0.99, where the nonlinear term (1/2+C_EFT)χ|χ| and the boundary condition are most important, the invariance claim is not yet robust. The authors should either derive or bound the EFT-corrected greybody factor for the dominant s-wave m=±1 photon modes, or perform a sensitivity analysis over C0 and over alternative monotonic functional completions (wi
  2. [Section II, boundary condition] The EFT-corrected extremal spin differs from χ=1, and the authors explicitly impose the boundary condition P_up(χ=1)=0 "as a proxy" (Sec. II). Since trajectories are counted as near-extremal at χ=0.99, the shape of P_up between 0.99 and the effective boundary is what determines the final fraction. A shifted boundary or a different assumption about the near-extremal probability can change the number of crossings. Please quantify the sensitivity of the fraction to the choice of boundary (e.g., by repeating the simulation with χ_ext = 1 ± δ for a plausible range of δ set by the EFT couplings) and, if possible, use the actual EFT extremal spin from the corrected metric rather than the GR value.
  3. [Section III, Eq. (8)] The tidal enhancement estimate δC uses the near-horizon scaling exponents γ_EFT and γ_GR from Ref. [12], which are derived at exact extremality, applied at χ=0.99 with an unspecified O(1) prefactor K1. The paper does not state the numerical values of γ used, nor does it quantify the error in extrapolating away from extremality. The conclusion that the resultant tides "should be detectable in future gravitational-wave observables" (Abstract) would require a concrete signal estimate; as it stands, the δC ~ 9--12 is an order-of-magnitude illustration. Please provide the exponents used, a robustness check of the near-extremal extrapolation, and either a detectability estimate or a softened conclusion.
minor comments (6)
  1. [Section II] The "budget-splitting criterion" is mentioned but never defined. Please write down the inequality used to exclude parameter points, so that the viable-point count (~500) is reproducible.
  2. [Section II] The cutoff mass M_cut used in the termination criterion is not defined. State its value and whether it is varied.
  3. [Appendix B] The sentence "guided by the low-spin analysis of [21]" cites Ref. [21] (Nomura, Varela, Weinberg), which does not appear to address Hawking-emission greybody factors. Check the citation and provide a relevant reference.
  4. [Eq. (7)] The notation C_{ρAρB} should be defined more carefully, including the frame in which the components are evaluated; as written, the indices ρ, A, B are ambiguous.
  5. [Introduction vs Section III] The text quotes ~22% from Ref. [11] and then 24.7% for the χ=0.99 cutoff. The difference is explained in Sec. III, but the Introduction/abstract should state this explicitly to avoid confusion.
  6. [Figure 3] The caption does not describe which panel shows χ, J, or T; please label the panels or expand the caption.

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity: the spin-up fraction and tidal estimates are computed from externally constrained inputs, not fitted to the claimed outputs.

full rationale

The central simulation output (24.6–24.9% near-extremal PBHs) is not fitted to that target; it is obtained by evolving 10^6 trajectories using the probability model of Eq. (6)/(B5). The coefficient C0 is set to −1 merely to recover the GR model of Ref. [11] when EFT couplings vanish, which is a calibration to an independent prior model, not a fit to the EFT spin-up fraction. The EFT couplings η, λ, and λ̃ are sampled from ranges justified by causality/unitarity constraints, not chosen to reproduce the 24.6–24.9% result. The paper explicitly acknowledges the main limitations of the probability parametrization: the greybody-factor spin/frequency dependence is unavailable (Section II), the χ=1 boundary condition is used as a proxy because the EFT extremal spin is unknown (Section II), and the tidal exponents γEFT are adopted from Ref. [12] as a rough proxy for near-extremal configurations (Section III). These are transparent assumptions rather than circular definitions. The tidal enhancement δC is computed using independent external inputs (temperature corrections from Ref. [15], scaling exponents from Ref. [12]) and is an order-of-magnitude estimate the authors flag as approximate. There are no load-bearing self-citations by the present authors, and no equation is shown to reduce to its own input by construction. The claim that EFT corrections leave the fraction nearly unchanged follows from the smallness of the allowed EFT couplings in the perturbative regime, not from a definitional identity.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

6 free parameters · 7 axioms · 0 invented entities

The central claim rests on the stochastic Hawking-emission model inherited from Ref. [11], the EFT-corrected temperature from Refs. [15,16], and a parametrized emission probability whose EFT part is explicitly guessed. The simulation adds hand-chosen cut-offs (χ_max = 0.99; M_cut unspecified) and scans over hand-chosen coupling ranges. The tidal-enhancement leg rests on scaling exponents imported from exact-extremality analyses in Ref. [12]. No genuinely new entity is postulated; the free constants are the probability coefficients, the cut-offs, and the O(1) tidal prefactor.

free parameters (6)
  • C0 = -1 (set by hand)
    Coefficient in the emission probability (Appendix B, Eqs. B3-B5); set to -1 'for our convenience' so the EFT-off model reduces to the GR model of Ref. [11]. Directly controls the spin-up bias, hence the fraction.
  • χ_max = 0.99
    Sub-extremal cut-off imposed because the EFT temperature is non-analytic at extremality; raises the GR fraction from Ref. [11]'s 22% at χ=1 to 24.7% at χ=0.99.
  • M_cut = not specified
    Mass below which a trajectory is halted; the termination condition is not given a numeric value in the text, so the duration of the random walk is incompletely specified.
  • EFT coupling ranges (η, λ, λ̃) = η∈[-1.85e-5,0], λ∈[0,1.1e-7], λ̃∈[0,1.7e-8]
    Scanned ranges chosen by hand after 'scanning over several different weight combinations'; motivated by causality/unitarity bounds but the range selection is not derived. The fraction is computed over these ranges.
  • K1 (tidal ratio prefactor) = O(1), not computed
    Prefactor in δC (Eq. 8), assumed order one; the tidal enhancement estimate is proportional to it but its value is not determined.
  • γ_EFT, γ_GR scaling exponents = taken from Ref. [12]
    Near-horizon Weyl scaling exponents used in Eq. 7-8; computed in Ref. [12] at exact extremality and extrapolated to χ=0.99 as a 'rough proxy'.
axioms (7)
  • domain assumption The EFT Lagrangian (1) and the temperature expansion (2) correctly capture leading higher-derivative corrections at M~1.3 M_Pl.
    Taken from Refs. [12,14,15]; the paper relies on the perturbative expansion without establishing convergence at the end-state masses.
  • domain assumption Hawking radiation is a sequence of discrete photon emissions, each changing J by ±1 and mass by δM = x T_EFT with x drawn from a Planck distribution.
    Stochastic model inherited from Ref. [11]; not derived from field theory.
  • domain assumption Only l=0, m=±1 s-wave photon modes contribute to the spin evolution.
    Section II: 'consider only the dominant s-wave emission channel' — approximation from Hawking/Page.
  • ad hoc to paper The emission probability has the form P = 1/2 ∓ (1+C_EFT) χ ± (1/2+C_EFT) χ|χ|, with C0 = -1 and boundary conditions at χ=±1.
    Appendix B: linear-in-χ expansion plus a χ|χ| term chosen to preserve monotonicity; C0 'parametrizes our ignorance of the exact greybody factors' and is set for convenience. This is the load-bearing input of the random walk.
  • ad hoc to paper The EFT-corrected extremal spin is approximated by χ=1 when fixing boundary conditions.
    Section II: 'we have used the boundary condition at χ=1 as a proxy' despite the extremality shift.
  • ad hoc to paper The temperature-correction functions ΔT(χ) (Appendix A) remain valid at χ=0.99 and M~1.3 M_Pl.
    Perturbative validity asserted via a 'budget-splitting' criterion that is never stated.
  • ad hoc to paper The near-extremal scaling exponents γ from Ref. [12] (computed at exact extremality) apply at χ=0.99.
    Section III: 'Although these values strictly apply at extremality, we adopt them here as a rough proxy.'

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The search for dark matter candidates includes primordial black holes (PBHs) as possible constituents. Recent studies show that some PBHs can survive to the present epoch by gaining angular momentum through Hawking radiating photons and becoming extremal before complete evaporation. While this provides a plausible model in a two-derivative theory of gravity, additional issues arise in EFT-corrected theories of gravity. In such theories, a rapidly spinning black hole can lead to extremely high tidal forces on a near-horizon observer, with possible observational consequences. In this work, by modeling Hawking radiation as a biased random walk within an EFT of gravity, we show that nearly the same fraction of PBHs survives as in GR. We argue that the resultant near horizon tidal effects should be detectable in future gravitational-wave observables.

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