REVIEW 3 major objections 4 minor 15 references
Performance Analysis of RIS-Aided High-Mobility Wireless Systems
T0 review · 3 major / 4 minor · reviewed 2026-08-05 · deepseek-v4-flash
Pith's one-line read Jointly optimizing RIS phases and transmit beamforming gives a high-speed train downlink 15 dB more channel gain and zero outage probability.
desk verdict The outage-elimination claim is contradicted by the paper's own non-central chi-square model, and the 'optimal' phase design is a heuristic; otherwise a routine RIS-HST extension. read the letter →
The pith
A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.
The reading
What carries the argument
A block coordinate descent loop that alternates between two blocks: the RIS phase-shift matrix and the transmit beamforming vector. The phase block is solved by using the structure of the line-of-sight path: the phase vector is chosen to cancel the Doppler phase e^{j2πk f_d T_c} and align with G w_k, and then a single phase rotation e^{jε_k} aligns the composite reflected path with the direct path. The beamforming block is the standard maximum-ratio transmission along the equivalent channel h_{r,k}^H Φ_k G + h_{d,k}^H. Together the two steps target the channel-gain objective F(w_k, Φ_k) in problem P1.
What would settle it
Simulate the same high-speed MISO link at Rician factor 3 with 1600 elements, and for a fixed beamformer compare the paper's line-of-sight-only phase update against a phase vector found by coordinate ascent or a direct search over phases; a measurable gain increase would falsify the claimed optimality. Separately, compute the outage count from the empirical distribution of |h_hat_k|^2 instead of the Gaussian approximation in Eqs. (22)-(23) and check whether outage remains exactly zero across all time slots.
Extended reading notes
Core claim
The central claim is that in a Rician high-speed train MISO downlink, the joint optimization of RIS phases and an MRT beamformer—not the beamformer alone—unlocks most of the performance. The proposed BCD algorithm averages 15 dB higher channel gain than MRT with random or zero RIS phases, and with 1600 RIS elements the optimized RIS eliminates outage probability at a 10 dB SNR threshold. The mechanism is a two-step phase update: first the RIS phases cancel the Doppler phase on the line-of-sight component of the reflected channel and beamform that component toward the receiver, then a common scalar rotation aligns the reflected signal with the direct signal; the beamformer is then updated as
Load-bearing premise
The load-bearing premise is that ignoring the non-line-of-sight part when setting the RIS phases, and then treating the whole optimized channel as one complex Gaussian, does not change the outcome; if either simplification is wrong, the 15 dB and zero-outage claims lose their support.
Editorial extensions
If this is right
- At the simulated parameters (1600 RIS elements, Rician factor 3, 360 km/h), the optimized RIS removes outage entirely rather than merely reducing it against a 10 dB SNR threshold.
- Achievable rate grows with the number of RIS elements for the RIS-aided link, while the no-RIS baseline stays flat in the number of elements.
- Channel capacity improves at every time slot, by up to about 1.5 kbps, suggesting the RIS suppresses the time-varying loss of the direct path.
- Bit error rate first worsens and then improves as the train moves from the base station toward the RIS, meaning the reflected path substitutes for the direct path.
- The 15 dB average gain is measured against schemes that use MRT without optimizing the RIS phase, so phase tuning itself is what carries most of the reported improvement.
Reading between the lines
- In my reading, the claimed optimality of the phase update stops after aligning the line-of-sight component; with Rician factor 3, the non-line-of-sight component still carries noticeable variance, so a phase update that also matches those parts should yield additional gain beyond the reported 15 dB.
- The zero-outage result is tied to the chosen operating point: smaller RIS arrays, lower Rician factors, or thresholds above 10 dB should bring outage back, and the paper's own Gaussian approximation is the first place to test that.
- A natural extension the paper does not pursue is applying the same BCD idea with discrete per-element phase constraints and imperfect channel estimates; the 15 dB and outage-elimination numbers would need recalibration under those constraints.
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Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper studies a RIS-assisted high-mobility HST MISO downlink. It formulates a channel-gain maximization problem P1 and proposes a BCD algorithm that alternates between a RIS phase update (LOS Doppler cancellation plus a scalar phase rotation) and MRT transmit beamforming. It then presents analytical expressions for achievable rate, channel capacity, outage probability, and BER, and reports simulations claiming an average 15 dB channel gain improvement over baselines and that the RIS 'eliminates' outage probability.
Significance. The problem is timely and the system model is representative of current RIS-railway studies. If the optimization were actually optimal and the outage model were correct, the claimed 15 dB gain and outage elimination would be noteworthy. A positive feature is that the simulation setup is self-contained and uses explicit parameters; no machine-checked proofs or reproducible code are provided. However, the central technical claims are not supported: the proposed phase update is not the maximizer of the phase subproblem, and the outage analysis is internally inconsistent with the paper's own distributional model. The headline results therefore cannot be accepted as stated.
major comments (3)
- [Section III-A, Eqs. (13)-(17)] The proposed phase update does not solve the phase subproblem of P1. Equation (13) aligns only the LOS component of the cascaded channel; the NLOS term in Eq. (14), sqrt(1/(1+kappa)) h_NLOS,k Phi_k G w_k, is left uncontrolled and depends on the RIS phases through h_NLOS,k^H Phi_k G w_k. With kappa=3, the NLOS weight 1/(1+kappa)=0.25 is not negligible. The subsequent scalar rotation e^{j epsilon*} in Eq. (17) cannot compensate for per-element phase mismatches in the NLOS component. Thus Phi_k^* is not optimal, Algorithm 1's monotonicity/convergence is not established, and the labels 'optimal phase'/'optimal beamforming and phase' in Figs. 2-3 are unsupported. The 15 dB gain claim may be an artifact of this incomplete optimization rather than a true optimum.
- [Section IV-C, Eqs. (21)-(24)] The outage-elimination claim is mathematically impossible under the paper's own model. With hat_h_k ~ CN(mu_h,k, sigma^2_h,k) and sigma^2_h,k > 0 (as given by Eq. (23) for kappa=3), |hat_h_k|^2 has a non-central chi-square distribution with 2 degrees of freedom, whose CDF is strictly positive at any finite positive threshold. Since gamma_{0,k} = sigma^2 gamma_th / sigma^2_h,k > 0 for gamma_th=10 dB, Eq. (24) gives P_out,k > 0. Figure 3(b) shows P_out=0 for all time slots, contradicting Eq. (24). The Abstract and Section V claim that the RIS 'eliminates outage probability' is therefore false under the paper's own distributional assumptions.
- [Section IV-C, Eqs. (22)-(23)] The Gaussian model for hat_h_k is not derived and is generally incorrect. The phase e^{j epsilon*} in Eq. (17) depends on the random realizations of h_{k,(1)} and h_d,k^H w_k; multiplying the Gaussian NLOS component by this data-dependent phase breaks circular symmetry, so hat_h_k is not CN(mu_h,k, sigma^2_h,k). Moreover, Eq. (22) treats h_d,k^H w_k as a mean, while Eq. (23) uses |h_d,k^H w_k|^2 as a variance, but h_d,k^H w_k contains a deterministic LOS part. The quantity in Eq. (23) is the squared magnitude of a deterministic-plus-random quantity, not the variance of the composite channel. Thus Eq. (24) does not follow, and the simulated outage curve in Fig. 3(b) is not a consequence of the stated formulas.
minor comments (4)
- [Throughout] Typographical errors should be corrected: 'Achivable Rate' in Section IV-A and Fig. 2(b); 'Outrage probability' in Fig. 3(b); 'chanel gain' in Eq. (9); 'dictance' in Section V; 'coverage probability' should read 'outage probability' in the paragraph after Eq. (23).
- [Section III-A, Eqs. (11)-(13)] The notation is inconsistent: v_k is introduced as the vector of RIS phases, but Eq. (13) suddenly uses v_{k,(1)} without formally defining it. Also, the relationship between diag(h_LOS^H) G w_k in Eq. (12) and diag(a_y(theta_2, phi_2) circle a_z(phi_2)) G w_k in Eq. (13) should be stated explicitly.
- [Section IV-C, Eqs. (22)-(23)] The symbols rho and varrho are visually similar and used with different powers; using the explicit factors kappa/(1+kappa) and 1/(1+kappa) would improve clarity and avoid confusion in the variance formula.
- [Section V] The simulation section does not report Monte-Carlo repetitions, confidence intervals, or a comparison with an exhaustive/brute-force phase search for small N. Given that optimality is at issue, such a validation would be necessary to support the 15 dB gain claim.
Circularity Check
No significant circularity: simulations are self-contained and no prediction reduces to an input.
full rationale
The paper's derivation chain is self-contained. The system model defines the direct and cascaded Rician channels, the optimization problem P1, and the BCD updates in Eqs. (13)-(18). The phase-shift update uses the triangle inequality to fix a scalar rotation, and the beamforming update uses standard MRT; neither is a restatement of the reported conclusions. The 15 dB channel-gain improvement and outage results in Section V are obtained from Monte Carlo/analytic evaluation of the model, not from any parameter fitted to match a target. The paper cites prior work by the authors (refs. [6], [9]-[12]) only as background and system-model context; no load-bearing claim depends on those citations. Concerns about the outage-elimination claim under the paper's own non-central chi-square model (Eqs. 22-24) and the unjustified Gaussianity of h_k are internal-model consistency and correctness issues, not circularity: the derivation does not reduce a prediction to its input by construction. Under the requested rubric, no circular step is exhibitable from the text.
Assumptions & free parameters
assumptions (4)
- ad hoc to paper The RIS phase update may ignore the NLOS component of the cascaded channel and still be called optimal
- domain assumption Perfect CSI of all links is available for each time slot
- domain assumption The composite channel \hat{h}_k is complex Gaussian with mean and variance as in Eqs. 22-23
- standard math Rician factor κ and Jakes Doppler spectrum describe the HST channel
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read the original abstract
Reconfigurable intelligent surface (RIS) technology holds immense potential for increasing the performance of wireless networks. Therefore, RIS is also regarded as one of the solutions to address communication challenges in high-mobility scenarios, such as Doppler shift and fast fading. This paper investigates a high-speed train (HST) multiple-input single-output (MISO) communication system aided by a RIS. We propose a block coordinate descent (BCD) algorithm to jointly optimize the RIS phase shifts and the transmit beamforming vectors to maximize the channel gain. Numerical results are provided to demonstrate that the proposed algorithm significantly enhances the system performance, achieving an average channel gain improvement of 15 dB compared to traditional schemes. Additionally, the introduction of RIS eliminates outage probability and improves key performance metrics such as achievable rate, channel capacity, and bit error rate (BER). These findings highlight the critical role of RIS in enhancing HST communication systems.
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