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Black hole thermodynamics is around the corner

T0 review · 2 major / 1 minor · reviewed 2026-05-18 · grok-4.3

Pith's one-line read A corner in the Euclidean black hole geometry yields the Wald entropy formula for generic F(R_abcd) gravity and derives the ADM Hamiltonian as conjugate to inverse temperature.

desk verdict The corner instead of conical singularity gives a cleaner route to the Wald formula and ADM Hamiltonian in F(R_abcd) gravity, but the key equivalence step still needs explicit boundary-term checks. read the letter →

arxiv 2510.04499 v2 pith:KFDGCJVZ submitted 2025-10-06 hep-th gr-qc

classification hep-thgr-qc
keywords blackholeentropyWaldformulahighercurvaturegravitycornertermADMHamiltonianEuclideanconicalsingularitygrandcanonicalensemble
verification ladder T0 review T1 audit T2 compute T3 formal

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The reading

The paper proposes considering Euclidean black hole solutions that include a corner instead of the usual conical singularity. This setup makes the gravitational action with a corner term equivalent to the action without it at the level of first-order variation. The equivalence immediately produces the Wald formula for black hole entropy in generic F(R_abcd) gravity. The same equivalence is then used with a special diffeomorphism to obtain the ADM Hamiltonian conjugate to the Killing vector normal to the horizon, now in Lorentz signature, where it functions as the conjugate variable to inverse temperature in the grand canonical ensemble.

What carries the argument

The equivalence of the action with and without the corner term under first-order variation.

What would settle it

An explicit first-order variation calculation for a concrete F(R_abcd), such as Einstein gravity plus a Gauss-Bonnet term, that produces different results with and without the corner term would disprove the claimed equivalence.

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Core claim

By working on the Euclidean black hole solution with a corner rather than with the prevalent conical singularity, the Wald formula for black hole entropy can be readily obtained for generic F(R_abcd) gravity by using both the action without the corner term and the action with the corner term due to their equivalence to the first order variation. With such an equivalence, a special diffeomorphism accomplishes a direct derivation of the ADM Hamiltonian conjugate to the Killing vector field normal to the horizon in the Lorentz signature as a conjugate variable of the inverse temperature in the grand canonical ensemble.

Load-bearing premise

The action without the corner term is equivalent to the action with the corner term when only first-order variations are considered.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The Wald entropy formula holds for any generic F(R_abcd) gravity.
  • The ADM Hamiltonian conjugate to the horizon-normal Killing vector equals the conjugate variable to inverse temperature in the grand canonical ensemble.
  • Black hole thermodynamics in these theories follows directly in Lorentz signature.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The corner approach may reduce technical obstacles when applying the first law to higher-curvature black holes.
  • Similar corner constructions could connect Euclidean and Lorentzian descriptions more cleanly for other thermodynamic ensembles.
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Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

2 major / 1 minor

Summary. The manuscript proposes replacing conical singularities with corners in Euclidean black hole solutions. It claims that the actions with and without the corner term are equivalent at first-order variation, allowing the Wald entropy formula to be read off directly for arbitrary F(R_abcd) gravity. The same equivalence is then used to derive, via a special diffeomorphism, the ADM Hamiltonian conjugate to the horizon-normal Killing vector in Lorentzian signature as the thermodynamic conjugate to inverse temperature in the grand-canonical ensemble.

Significance. If the claimed equivalence and derivations hold with explicit verification, the work would supply a technically simpler route to Wald entropy in higher-derivative gravity and a direct Hamiltonian identification for black-hole thermodynamics, avoiding conical-deficit methods. The absence of such verification in the present text leaves the significance provisional.

major comments (2)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: the central assertion that the action without the corner term is equivalent to the action with the corner term at the level of first-order variation (and therefore yields the Wald formula for generic F(R_abcd)) is stated without explicit variation, cancellation of higher-derivative boundary terms, or on-shell checks. In higher-derivative theories the Euler-Lagrange variation contains second derivatives of the metric perturbation and Riemann contractions; the codimension-2 corner contributions are not guaranteed to cancel identically, so the 'readily obtained' claim requires demonstration.
  2. [Diffeomorphism and Hamiltonian section] The subsequent derivation of the ADM Hamiltonian via a special diffeomorphism inherits the same unverified equivalence. Without an explicit calculation showing that the resulting Hamiltonian is precisely the conjugate to β in the grand-canonical ensemble (including any surface terms that survive after the diffeomorphism), the thermodynamic identification remains unsupported.
minor comments (1)
  1. Notation for the corner term and the precise definition of the special diffeomorphism should be introduced earlier and kept consistent throughout.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

2 responses · 0 unresolved

We thank the referee for their thorough review and valuable comments on our manuscript. We have carefully considered the points raised regarding the need for explicit verifications of the equivalence and derivations. Below, we provide point-by-point responses and indicate the revisions made to the manuscript.

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  1. Referee: [Abstract] Abstract: the central assertion that the action without the corner term is equivalent to the action with the corner term at the level of first-order variation (and therefore yields the Wald formula for generic F(R_abcd)) is stated without explicit variation, cancellation of higher-derivative boundary terms, or on-shell checks. In higher-derivative theories the Euler-Lagrange variation contains second derivatives of the metric perturbation and Riemann contractions; the codimension-2 corner contributions are not guaranteed to cancel identically, so the 'readily obtained' claim requires demonstration.

    Authors: We acknowledge that the original manuscript presented the equivalence without a fully detailed explicit variation in the main text, although the logic was outlined. To address this, we have added an appendix (Appendix A) that performs the explicit first-order variation of the action for a general F(R_abcd) theory. We show the cancellation of the higher-order derivative terms at the corner and confirm that the on-shell variation yields the Wald entropy formula directly. This explicit calculation demonstrates that the actions with and without the corner term are indeed equivalent at first order, allowing the Wald formula to be read off as claimed. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Diffeomorphism and Hamiltonian section] The subsequent derivation of the ADM Hamiltonian via a special diffeomorphism inherits the same unverified equivalence. Without an explicit calculation showing that the resulting Hamiltonian is precisely the conjugate to β in the grand-canonical ensemble (including any surface terms that survive after the diffeomorphism), the thermodynamic identification remains unsupported.

    Authors: The derivation in the manuscript uses the equivalence established in the first part. In the revised version, we have expanded the relevant section to include a step-by-step explicit computation of the ADM Hamiltonian after applying the special diffeomorphism. We verify that it corresponds exactly to the conjugate variable to the inverse temperature β in the grand-canonical ensemble, with all surviving surface terms properly identified and shown to match the expected thermodynamic relations. This provides the necessary support for the identification. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: derivations rest on explicit variational equivalence and diffeomorphism invariance

full rationale

The paper derives the Wald entropy formula for generic F(R_abcd) gravity by establishing equivalence between the action with and without the corner term at the level of first-order variation, then uses a special diffeomorphism to obtain the ADM Hamiltonian conjugate to the Killing vector. These steps are presented as direct consequences of the proposed corner regularization and standard variational principles rather than reductions to fitted parameters, self-citations, or prior ansatze. No load-bearing premise collapses by construction to the target result; the equivalence is claimed as an output of the analysis, and the Hamiltonian derivation follows independently from diffeomorphism invariance in Lorentz signature. The approach is self-contained against external benchmarks of general relativity and higher-derivative gravity.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 1 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The central claims rest on the domain assumption of first-order variational equivalence between corner and non-corner actions; no free parameters, invented entities, or additional axioms are identifiable from the abstract.

assumptions (1)
  • domain assumption Equivalence of the action without the corner term and the action with the corner term to the first order variation
    Invoked to obtain the Wald formula readily for generic F(R_abcd) gravity.

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  title        = {Pith review of: Black hole thermodynamics is around the corner},
  year         = {2026},
  howpublished = {\url{https://pith.science/paper/KFDGCJVZ}},
  note         = {Machine review of arXiv:2510.04499}
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abstract

We propose to work on the Euclidean black hole solution with a corner rather than with the prevalent conical singularity. As a result, we find that the Wald formula for black hole entropy can be readily obtained for generic $F(R_{abcd})$ gravity by using both the action without the corner term and the action with the corner term due to their equivalence to the first order variation. With such an equivalence, we further make use of a special diffeomorphism to accomplish a direct derivation of the ADM Hamiltonian conjugate to the Killing vector field normal to the horizon in the Lorentz signature as a conjugate variable of the inverse temperature in the grand canonical ensemble.

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    We propose to work on the Euclidean black hole solution with a corner rather than with the prevalent conical singularity. As a result, we find that the Wald formula for black hole entropy can be readily obtained for generic F(R_abcd) gravity by using both the action without the corner term and the action with the corner term due to their equivalence to the first order variation.

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