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Identifying Peer Effects in Networks with Unobserved Effort and Isolated Students

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Pith's one-line read Peer effects on effort appear 40 percent larger once shocks to the outcome are separated from those that change effort itself.

desk verdict The paper claims that separating effort-neutral GPA shocks from effort-affecting preference shocks via isolated students yields peer effects estimates 40% larger than GPA-proxy methods. read the letter →

arxiv 2405.06850 v3 submitted 2024-05-10 econ.EM

Aristide Houndetoungan , Cristelle Kouame , Michael Vlassopoulos This is my paper · ORCID
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The reading

The paper develops a method to estimate peer influence on effort when only an outcome like GPA is observed. Classical approaches treat the outcome as a direct stand-in for effort, but this mixes in unrelated shocks. The new framework separates shocks that alter the outcome without touching effort from preference shocks that do change effort levels. This separation produces different peer-effect estimates whenever the network contains isolated students. In US high-school data the standard proxy approach yields estimates 40 percent smaller than the corrected ones.

What carries the argument

The separation of unobserved shocks to the outcome that leave effort unchanged from preference shocks that alter effort levels, which permits identification of peer effects even when isolated students are present.

What would settle it

Estimates of peer effects remain identical when the method is applied to the same network both with and without its isolated students.

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Core claim

Peer effects estimates obtained using the proposed approach, which distinguishes unobserved shocks to GPA that do not affect effort from preference shocks that do affect effort levels, can differ significantly from classical estimates that approximate effort with the observed outcome if the network includes isolated students. In an application to high school students in the United States, peer effect estimates relying on GPA as a proxy for effort are 40 percent lower than those obtained using the new approach.

Load-bearing premise

Shocks to the observed outcome can be divided into two distinct types, one that leaves effort unchanged and one that changes effort.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • Classical estimates that use the outcome as a proxy for effort will be biased when isolated students exist in the network.
  • The size of the bias depends on the share of isolated students and the structure of preference shocks.
  • The corrected estimates can be recovered from standard outcome data once the two shock types are distinguished.
  • Applications to other networks with unobserved effort will produce different results from proxy-based studies whenever isolates are present.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • Earlier studies of peer effects in education may have understated the strength of peer influence on effort.
  • The distinction between shock types could be tested in other outcome measures such as wages or health behaviors.
  • Network interventions aimed at raising effort may need recalibration if the true peer multiplier is larger than previously measured.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The manuscript proposes a structural framework to identify peer effects on unobserved effort in networks, where the observed outcome (such as GPA) is a composite of effort and idiosyncratic shocks. By distinguishing effort-neutral GPA shocks from effort-affecting preference shocks and exploiting isolated students to separate their distributions, the authors derive peer-effects estimates that differ from classical proxy-based approaches when the network contains isolates. In an application to US high-school data, classical estimates using GPA as a proxy for effort are reported to be 40% lower than those obtained with the proposed method.

Significance. If the separation of shock distributions via isolates is valid, the approach offers a direct way to recover peer effects on effort rather than on a composite outcome, addressing a common measurement problem in network econometrics and education research. The reported 40% discrepancy suggests that standard approximations may systematically understate peer influence when isolates are present, which could affect policy conclusions about social multipliers in achievement.

major comments (2)
  1. [Identification section] The central identification result hinges on the claim that isolated students allow separate recovery of the distributions of GPA shocks and preference shocks (abstract and identification section). The manuscript should explicitly derive or simulate how the presence of isolates breaks the observational equivalence that otherwise confounds the two shock types, including the precise moment conditions or likelihood contributions used.
  2. [Empirical results] Table reporting the 40% difference (empirical application): the comparison between the new estimates and the classical GPA-proxy estimates must include standard errors or confidence intervals on the difference itself, as well as the exact specification of the classical benchmark (e.g., which network moments or fixed effects are held constant).
minor comments (2)
  1. [Model section] Notation for the two shock processes should be introduced with explicit subscripts or superscripts to avoid confusion between the composite outcome and the latent effort equation.
  2. [Abstract] The abstract states the 40% figure without indicating whether it is an average across specifications or a single preferred estimate; a parenthetical note on the baseline specification would improve readability.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the positive assessment and the constructive suggestions for improving the manuscript. We address each major comment below.

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  1. Referee: [Identification section] The central identification result hinges on the claim that isolated students allow separate recovery of the distributions of GPA shocks and preference shocks (abstract and identification section). The manuscript should explicitly derive or simulate how the presence of isolates breaks the observational equivalence that otherwise confounds the two shock types, including the precise moment conditions or likelihood contributions used.

    Authors: We agree that greater explicitness on this point would strengthen the paper. While the identification section outlines how isolates permit separate recovery of the two shock distributions, we will add a dedicated derivation (including the relevant moment conditions) in the revised version to show precisely how the presence of isolates breaks observational equivalence between effort-neutral GPA shocks and effort-affecting preference shocks. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Empirical results] Table reporting the 40% difference (empirical application): the comparison between the new estimates and the classical GPA-proxy estimates must include standard errors or confidence intervals on the difference itself, as well as the exact specification of the classical benchmark (e.g., which network moments or fixed effects are held constant).

    Authors: We accept this recommendation. The revised manuscript will report standard errors (or confidence intervals) on the difference between the new estimates and the classical GPA-proxy estimates. We will also clarify the exact specification of the classical benchmark, confirming that identical network moments and fixed effects are used in both approaches. revision: yes

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full rationale

The paper's identification strategy separates effort-neutral GPA shocks from effort-affecting preference shocks by exploiting isolated students in the network. This separation is presented as an external source of variation that allows recovery of peer effects on effort rather than on the composite GPA outcome. No equation or step in the provided description reduces the estimated peer effect to a fitted parameter, self-citation chain, or definitional equivalence with the input data. The reported 40% difference from classical estimates follows from the model structure once the separation is granted, without evidence of tautological construction.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 2 assumptions · 0 invented entities

The central claim depends on the validity of separating shock types and the network structure including isolated students. No numerical free parameters or invented entities are specified in the abstract.

assumptions (2)
  • domain assumption The outcome (GPA) is a combination of effort and idiosyncratic shocks
    Standard in education economics, implied by the abstract.
  • ad hoc to paper Preference shocks affect effort levels while other shocks do not
    This is the key distinction introduced in the framework.

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read the original abstract

Peer influence on effort devoted to some activity is often studied when effort is unobserved, and the researcher instead observes an outcome that combines effort with other shocks. For instance, in education, achievement measures such as GPA reflect both effort and idiosyncratic GPA shocks. We propose an alternative approach that circumvents this approximation. Our framework distinguishes unobserved shocks to GPA that do not affect effort from preference shocks that do affect effort levels. We show that peer effects estimates obtained using our approach can differ significantly from classical estimates (where effort is approximated) if the network includes isolated students. Applying our approach to data on high school students in the United States, we find that peer effect estimates relying on GPA as a proxy for effort are 40% lower than those obtained using our approach.

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Figure 1
Figure 1. Solving the reflection problem Note: Ñ means that the node on the right side is a friend of the node on the left side. We employ a proof by contradiction. The nonidentification issue arises when the vector EpJsGsys|Gs, Xsq is perfectly collinear with JsXs and JsGsXs. For a non-isolated student, this suggests that there exist vector of parameters, β9 and γ9 , such that Epgs,iys´y NI s |Gs, Xsq “ pxs,i ´ˆxsq 1β9 ` pgs… view at source ↗
Figure 2
Figure 2. Effects of Shocks on the GPA This figure presents the distribution of the increase in the GPA subsequent to a 0.1-unit increase in αs and cs for the student sample (n = 68,430). “fully isolated" students allows us to conduct a robustness analysis, as it does not involve a missing network data issue. We thus define a new subsample by excluding the “fully isolated" students from our main sample, resulting in a subsamp… view at source ↗
Figure 3
Figure 3. Illustration of the identification Note: Ñ means that the node on the right side is a friend of the node on the left side. Many other situations lead to b1 “ b2 “ b3 “ 0. In practice, one can easily verify if Js, JspGs ` G1 s qJs and JsGsG1 sJs are linearly independent. C.2 Supplementary Results on the Estimation of pσ 2 ϵ , τ, ρq In this section, we use different notations for the parameters and their true values; … view at source ↗

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