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Integrated Lander-Propulsion-GNC Framework for Autonomous Lunar Powered Descent

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Pith's one-line read An integrated lander-propulsion-GNC system with successive convexification guidance reaches sub-50 meter lunar landing precision in Monte Carlo tests.

desk verdict This applies successive convexification to a specific lunar lander and throttleable engine, folding in mass change and dead-zone constraints for real-time solving, with Monte Carlo results that look usable but rest on untested simulation fidelity. read the letter →

arxiv 2604.23013 v1 submitted 2026-04-24 eess.SY astro-ph.EPastro-ph.IMcs.SY

Emre Aklan , Fatih Seker , Bekir Gencalioglu , Mehmet Batuhan Kaya , Yigit Serceoglu , Furkan Yavuz , Omer Burak Iskender , Burak Yaglioglu This is my paper · ORCID
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keywords lunarpowereddescentautonomousGNCsuccessiveconvexificationthrottleablepropulsionlandingprecisionMonteCarlosimulationvehicle-propellantintegrationreal-timeguidance
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The reading

This paper builds a complete framework that links the physical design of a vertical takeoff vertical landing test vehicle to a throttleable bipropellant engine and a real-time guidance algorithm. The successive convexification method converts thrust limits, fuel use, and engine dead zones into a single optimization problem that runs fast enough for onboard use. Parametric studies identify a direct link between how much the engine can throttle, its ability to point, and the Moon's gravity. Monte Carlo runs under modeled disturbances confirm the system lands within 50 meters of the target in most cases. This matters because precise autonomous landings reduce the risk and cost of placing equipment on the lunar surface without constant human oversight.

What carries the argument

The successive convexification algorithm, which converts all nonconvex constraints of powered descent guidance into a unified second-order cone program solvable in real time while accounting for variable thrust, mass change, and engine limits.

What would settle it

Flight test data from the BUG VTVL vehicle during powered descent that records a final position error larger than 50 meters when using the described guidance under conditions matching the simulation disturbances.

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Core claim

The integrated framework for the BUG VTVL vehicle and YUNT V0 engine uses successive convexification to solve the full powered descent problem as a second-order cone program, incorporating mass depletion, thrust bounds, and dead-zone constraints, and Monte Carlo simulations under realistic perturbations demonstrate sub-50 meter landing accuracy.

Load-bearing premise

The computer models of the vehicle's motion, engine throttle behavior, and disturbance forces match how the actual hardware will perform during a real lunar descent.

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Referee Report

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Summary. This paper presents an integrated lander-propulsion-GNC framework for autonomous lunar powered descent. It uses the BUG VTVL test vehicle with the YUNT V0 throttleable bipropellant engine, incorporating vehicle structural configuration, CoM migration, inertia evolution, throttle ratio, dead-zone behavior, and gimbal authority. A successive convexification algorithm formulates all nonconvexities (thrust lower bounds, mass depletion coupling, dead-zone) into a unified SOCP solvable in near real time. Parametric analysis identifies couplings between throttle ratio, pointing authority, and surface gravity. Monte Carlo simulations are reported to validate robustness with sub-50 m landing precision under realistic perturbations.

Significance. If the underlying models prove sufficiently accurate, the work offers a practical demonstration of embedding realistic propulsion constraints directly into a real-time convex guidance solver for lunar descent, which addresses a key implementation gap between theory and hardware limits. The unified SOCP treatment of multiple nonconvex effects and the parametric coupling analysis are clear technical strengths that could inform future mission design. The simulation-based precision result, however, has reduced significance absent explicit checks on model fidelity.

major comments (1)
  1. [Monte Carlo Simulations] Monte Carlo Simulations (as described in the abstract): The central claim of sub-50 m landing precision under realistic perturbations rests on the fidelity of the BUG VTVL vehicle dynamics, YUNT V0 propulsion constraints (throttle ratio, dead-zone, gimbal authority), mass depletion, and disturbance models. No hardware-in-the-loop testing, comparison to engine firing data, or sensitivity analysis quantifying the impact of unmodeled effects (e.g., propellant slosh, thermal thrust variation, sensor biases) is provided. This directly undermines the transferability of the reported robustness.
minor comments (1)
  1. [Abstract] Abstract: The statement that 'all nonconvexities' are handled would be clearer if it explicitly enumerated the full set (beyond the three mentioned) and briefly noted the SOCP reformulation steps for each.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the detailed assessment and for identifying the need to strengthen the discussion of model fidelity supporting the Monte Carlo results. We address the comment below and propose targeted revisions.

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  1. Referee: Monte Carlo Simulations (as described in the abstract): The central claim of sub-50 m landing precision under realistic perturbations rests on the fidelity of the BUG VTVL vehicle dynamics, YUNT V0 propulsion constraints (throttle ratio, dead-zone, gimbal authority), mass depletion, and disturbance models. No hardware-in-the-loop testing, comparison to engine firing data, or sensitivity analysis quantifying the impact of unmodeled effects (e.g., propellant slosh, thermal thrust variation, sensor biases) is provided. This directly undermines the transferability of the reported robustness.

    Authors: The vehicle dynamics and propulsion models are parameterized from the documented specifications of the BUG VTVL platform and YUNT V0 engine, including CoM migration, inertia evolution, throttle ratio, dead-zone behavior, and gimbal limits. The Monte Carlo campaign applies perturbations consistent with these specifications. We acknowledge that the manuscript does not contain hardware-in-the-loop testing or direct comparisons against engine firing data. To improve the assessment of robustness, the revised manuscript will include an additional sensitivity analysis that quantifies the effects of propellant slosh, thermal thrust variation, and sensor biases on landing precision and guidance performance. This will be presented in a new subsection with corresponding figures. revision: partial

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  • Hardware-in-the-loop testing results and direct comparisons to engine firing data, which are outside the simulation-based scope of the current study.

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full rationale

The paper describes an integrated lander-propulsion-GNC framework that models vehicle dynamics, propulsion constraints (throttle ratio, dead-zone, gimbal authority), mass depletion, and inertia evolution for the BUG VTVL platform with YUNT V0 engine. It applies a successive convexification algorithm to formulate the nonconvex guidance problem as a solvable second-order cone program. Monte Carlo simulations then validate robustness, reporting sub-50 m landing precision under modeled perturbations. No load-bearing step reduces a claimed result to a fitted input by construction, self-defines a quantity in terms of itself, or relies on a self-citation chain whose content is unverified outside the paper. The validation rests on external simulation execution rather than internal redefinition, and the central claims retain independent content from the optimization formulation and perturbation modeling.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 2 assumptions · 0 invented entities

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assumptions (2)
  • domain assumption Vehicle mass, inertia, and center-of-mass evolve predictably with propellant depletion during descent.
    Invoked when stating that the vehicle design accounts for mass depletion coupling.
  • domain assumption Thrust lower bounds, dead-zone behavior, and gimbal limits can be expressed as convex constraints after successive convexification.
    Central to the claim that all nonconvexities are handled in a unified SOCP.

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This paper presents an integrated lander-propulsion-GNC framework for autonomous lunar powered descent. The BUG VTVL test vehicle serves as the reference platform, with the YUNT V0 throttleable bipropellant engine providing variable thrust across a wide operating envelope, integrated with a real-time successive convexification guidance solver. The vehicle design accounts for structural configuration, landing stability, center-of-mass migration, and inertia evolution, while the propulsion architecture defines the throttle ratio, dead-zone behavior, and gimbal authority that constrain the guidance problem. A successive convexification algorithm addresses all nonconvexities; thrust lower bounds, mass depletion coupling, and thruster dead-zone behavior are all handled within a unified second-order cone program solvable in near-real time. Parametric analysis reveals a fundamental coupling between throttle ratio, pointing authority, and surface gravity. Monte Carlo simulations validate guidance robustness, achieving sub-50-meter landing precision under realistic perturbations.

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Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2604.23013 by the authors.

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Figure 1. BUG landing test vehicle (H = 2.26 m, D = 3.77 m, hCG = 1.47 m). Red ⊕ denotes centre of mass. (a) (b) view at source ↗
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Figure 3. YUNT V0 hot-fire test. thermal-model anchoring, and multi-point operation at dis￾crete throttle settings spanning the targeted envelope. Across 16 firings ( view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Chamber-pressure time history: ignition, steady-state, and shutdown. view at source ↗
Figures from the paper (3 more)
Figure 6
Figure 6. Figure 6: Hop trajectories for θmax ∈ {10◦, . . . , 60◦}. Fuel cost and flight time decrease as tilt authority increases. 0 250 500 750 1000 1250 1500 1750 2000 Downrange (m) 0 100 200 300 Altitude (m) Closed-Loop Monte Carlo Hop Trajectories (N = 1000) Nominal Launch Target
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Figure 7. Figure 7: Closed-loop Monte Carlo (N=1000): nominal (green), failure modes
Figure 5
Figure 5. Figure 5: Lossless convexification: (a) nonconvex set; (b) lifted SOC.

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