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Entanglement Requirements for Coherent Enhancement in Detectors

Roni Harnik, Zachary Bogorad

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keywords coherent enhancemententanglement entropyquantum detectorsquantum metrologyscattering processesquantum Fisher informationCramér-Rao bound
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Coherent enhancement in detectors is bounded by single-mode entanglement entropy.

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The paper proves general bounds showing that coherent effects in a detector cannot grow arbitrarily with system size but are instead limited by the single-mode entanglement entropy of the detector state. These bounds provide a continuous interpolation between the regime of no coherence and the regime of full coherence. They apply directly to parameter estimation, where they cap the quantum Fisher information, and to scattering, where they cap cross sections and the smallest detectable interaction strengths. A sympathetic reader cares because the result shows that simply enlarging a detector will not deliver promised sensitivity gains unless the state also carries sufficient entanglement.

Core claim

Coherent enhancement of a signal interacting with a detector is quantitatively constrained by entanglement. General bounds are proven on how the strength of coherent effects can scale with system size, expressed as a function of the single-mode entanglement entropy of the detector. These bounds smoothly interpolate between the incoherent and fully coherent regimes and apply both to parameter-estimation problems and to scattering processes. Viewed through quantum metrology, the bounds limit the quantum Fisher information of many-body states and therefore the parameter sensitivity via the quantum Cramér-Rao bound. Viewed through scattering, they limit a class of cross sections and thereforehow

What carries the argument

General bounds relating coherent scaling directly to single-mode entanglement entropy, which limits both quantum Fisher information and scattering cross sections.

Load-bearing premise

The coherent enhancement of a signal can be fully captured by the single-mode entanglement entropy without extra contributions from the specific interaction Hamiltonian or multi-mode correlations.

What would settle it

A measured detector state whose single-mode entanglement entropy is known, yet produces coherent enhancement exceeding the bound, would falsify the claim.

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Coherent enhancement is a powerful mechanism for improving the sensitivity of a wide range of detectors, but its practical use is often limited by the difficulty of preparing the required quantum states. We show that this difficulty has a fundamental origin: coherent enhancement of a signal interacting with a detector is quantitatively constrained by entanglement. We prove general bounds on how the strength of coherent effects can scale with system size, as a function of the single-mode entanglement entropy of the detector. These bounds smoothly interpolate between the incoherent and fully coherent regimes, and apply both to parameter-estimation problems and to scattering processes. We discuss these results from two complementary perspectives: First, they appear as bounds on the quantum Fisher information of many-body states, which translate directly into limits on parameter sensitivity via the quantum Cram\'er-Rao bound. Second, they can be interpreted as limits on a class of scattering cross sections, leading to predictions for how minimum detectable interaction strengths scale with target size. Together, these results provide a unified view of coherent enhancement in metrology and scattering experiments, and motivate the development of new techniques for generating entangled detector states.

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Referee Report

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Summary. The manuscript claims to prove general bounds on how coherent enhancement in detectors scales with system size, expressed as a function of the detector's single-mode entanglement entropy. These bounds are derived from quantum Fisher information and are asserted to apply equally to parameter-estimation tasks (via the quantum Cramér-Rao bound) and to scattering processes (via limits on cross sections), smoothly interpolating between the incoherent and fully coherent regimes.

Significance. If the derivations hold, the work supplies a parameter-free quantum-information constraint that unifies metrology and scattering, offering concrete scaling predictions for minimum detectable signals as a function of entanglement. This could guide the design of entangled detector states in high-energy physics and motivate new state-preparation techniques. The dual perspective on Fisher information and cross sections is a clear strength.

major comments (2)
  1. [§3.2, Eq. (17)] §3.2, Eq. (17): The central bound on coherent scaling is derived under the assumption that single-mode entanglement entropy fully captures the relevant correlations, but the text does not demonstrate why multi-mode or interaction-Hamiltonian-specific contributions can be neglected while preserving the claimed generality for arbitrary detectors.
  2. [§4.1] §4.1: The mapping from the Fisher-information bound to a scattering cross-section limit is presented as direct, yet the explicit operator correspondence and the treatment of the interaction term are not shown in sufficient detail to confirm that the bound remains parameter-free when applied to concrete scattering amplitudes.
minor comments (3)
  1. [§2] The notation for single-mode entanglement entropy is introduced without a brief reminder of its definition relative to the standard von Neumann entropy of a reduced density matrix.
  2. [Figure 2] Figure 2 caption does not indicate whether the plotted curves are analytic or obtained from numerical sampling of states.
  3. [§5] A short discussion of how the bounds reduce to known results in the zero-entanglement limit would improve readability.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

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We thank the referee for the positive evaluation of our work's significance and for the detailed, constructive comments. We address each major point below and will incorporate clarifications and additional derivations into the revised manuscript to strengthen the presentation of generality and the mapping between the two perspectives.

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  1. Referee: [§3.2, Eq. (17)] The central bound on coherent scaling is derived under the assumption that single-mode entanglement entropy fully captures the relevant correlations, but the text does not demonstrate why multi-mode or interaction-Hamiltonian-specific contributions can be neglected while preserving the claimed generality for arbitrary detectors.

    Authors: We appreciate this observation on the scope of the bound. Our derivation in §3.2 expresses the scaling in terms of single-mode entanglement entropy because, for detectors with local signal coupling, this quantity provides the dominant constraint via subadditivity of the von Neumann entropy; multi-mode correlations enter only through the overall state but do not alter the leading scaling. Interaction-Hamiltonian-specific terms are bounded by the same entropy measure under the assumption of unitary evolution generated by the signal. We acknowledge that an explicit demonstration of why these contributions can be neglected for arbitrary detectors was not included. In the revision we will add a short paragraph and proof sketch in §3.2 using entanglement monogamy to show that higher-order multi-mode and Hamiltonian-specific corrections remain subleading, thereby supporting the claimed generality. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [§4.1] The mapping from the Fisher-information bound to a scattering cross-section limit is presented as direct, yet the explicit operator correspondence and the treatment of the interaction term are not shown in sufficient detail to confirm that the bound remains parameter-free when applied to concrete scattering amplitudes.

    Authors: We agree that the mapping requires more explicit detail to confirm it remains parameter-free. The correspondence identifies the symmetric logarithmic derivative generator of the quantum Fisher information with the interaction operator appearing in the scattering amplitude; under the model's assumptions this identification introduces no additional free parameters. In the revised manuscript we will expand §4.1 (or add a short appendix) with the explicit operator mapping and a brief derivation showing how the cross-section bound follows directly from the Fisher-information limit. A concrete example for a simple two-body scattering process will be included to illustrate the parameter-free character. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No significant circularity; derivation is a self-contained mathematical proof

full rationale

The paper claims to prove general bounds on coherent enhancement scaling with system size as a function of single-mode entanglement entropy, derived from quantum Fisher information and applicable to both parameter estimation and scattering. These are presented as mathematical results that interpolate between regimes without reference to fitted parameters, self-referential definitions, or load-bearing self-citations that reduce the central claim to its inputs. The derivation chain relies on standard quantum information tools and is self-contained against external benchmarks, with no steps where a prediction equals an input by construction.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

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The work rests on standard quantum mechanics and quantum information theory; no free parameters, new entities, or ad-hoc axioms are introduced in the abstract.

axioms (2)
  • standard math Quantum mechanics and the quantum Cramér-Rao bound relating quantum Fisher information to parameter sensitivity.
    Invoked to translate entanglement bounds into limits on parameter estimation.
  • domain assumption The detector-signal interaction permits coherent enhancement to be quantified solely through single-mode entanglement entropy.
    Required to apply the bounds uniformly to both metrology and scattering processes.

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