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arxiv: 2605.29840 · v1 · pith:YHPFITCBnew · submitted 2026-05-28 · 🪐 quant-ph

Toward Practical Two-Way Covert Communication

Paul N. Fessatidis , Wyatt Wallis , Tae E. Cooper , Mark J. Meisner , Jaim Bucay , Saikat Guha , Shelbi L. Jenkins , Michael S. Bullock
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Boulat A. Bash
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keywords covert communicationtwo-way communicationoptical bosonic channelsnarrowband lasercorrelator receiverquantum adversarymode matching
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A narrowband laser source and correlator receiver make two-way covert optical communication practical against quantum adversaries.

A machine-rendered reading of the paper's core claim, the machinery that carries it, and where it could break.

The paper sets out to establish that two-way covert communication over optical bosonic channels can move from theory to workable systems by replacing broadband sources with a narrowband laser. It reports an experimental proof-of-concept demonstration in which information is sent by modulating a reflected signal, with the adversary treated as quantum-capable. A correlator-based receiver is introduced to recover the performance gains normally associated with quantum light without requiring exact mode matching or phase synchronization. If these steps hold, covert links become feasible with standard laboratory equipment rather than specialized broadband setups.

Core claim

We employ a narrowband laser source to experimentally demonstrate a proof-of-concept two-way covert communication system, where the adversary is assumed to be quantum-capable. Furthermore, we propose a correlator-based receiver that attains the broadband gain offered by a quantum light source without the need for precise mode matching.

What carries the argument

The correlator-based receiver, which extracts information from the reflected modulated signal to capture broadband performance advantages without mode matching.

If this is right

  • Two-way covert links become realizable with ordinary narrowband lasers in optical channels.
  • Mode-matching and phase-synchronization hardware can be omitted while retaining quantum-light performance.
  • Covert communication remains viable even when the eavesdropper has quantum detection capabilities.
  • Experimental validation on real optical hardware confirms the scheme works at proof-of-concept level.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

These are editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The same receiver architecture might simplify other covert or low-probability-of-intercept optical protocols.
  • Deployment in fiber networks could reduce alignment overhead compared with broadband quantum sources.
  • Further tests under varying loss and noise would clarify the practical throughput limits.

Load-bearing premise

A correlator-based receiver can deliver the broadband performance gain of a quantum light source without precise mode matching, an assumption stated without derivation or supporting measurements.

What would settle it

A side-by-side measurement of covert rate or detection probability using the proposed correlator receiver versus a standard receiver on the same narrowband source, checking whether the claimed gain appears without mode matching.

Figures

Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2605.29840 by Boulat A. Bash, Jaim Bucay, Mark J. Meisner, Michael S. Bullock, Paul N. Fessatidis, Saikat Guha, Shelbi L. Jenkins, Tae E. Cooper, Wyatt Wallis.

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Figure 1. Figure 1: Two-way covert communication model where Willie stands behind [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p002_1.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 2. Figure 2: Experimental setup. The coherent source (Amonics ADFB-1550- [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p004_2.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 3. Figure 3: Experimental results discussed in Section IV-B. [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_3.png] view at source ↗
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Figure 4. Figure 4: Configuration for the proposed correlator-based covert [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p005_4.png] view at source ↗
read the original abstract

We study two-way covert communication schemes, where information is transmitted by passively modulating a reflected signal back to the source. We consider optical systems, described by quantum bosonic channels. While broadband classical and quantum light sources offer high covert throughput in theory, the associated mode-matching and phase-synchronization requirements make them impractical. Therefore, we employ a narrowband laser source to experimentally demonstrate a proof-of-concept two-way covert communication system, where the adversary is assumed to be quantum-capable. Furthermore, we propose a correlator-based receiver that attains the broadband gain offered by a quantum light source without the need for precise mode matching.

Editorial analysis

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Referee Report

2 major / 2 minor

Summary. The paper studies two-way covert communication over quantum bosonic channels via passive modulation of reflected signals. It reports an experimental proof-of-concept demonstration using a narrowband laser source against a quantum-capable adversary and proposes a correlator-based receiver intended to deliver the broadband gain of a quantum light source without requiring precise mode matching.

Significance. A validated correlator-based receiver that achieves broadband covert rates without mode-matching overhead would address a central engineering barrier to practical covert optical links, potentially enabling higher-throughput secure communication in adversarial settings. The experimental component, if substantiated, would provide initial evidence of feasibility under quantum-adversary assumptions.

major comments (2)
  1. [Abstract, §4] Abstract and §4 (proposal of correlator receiver): the central claim that the correlator-based receiver attains the broadband gain of a quantum light source without precise mode matching is stated without any derivation, performance analysis, comparison to quantum-source baselines, simulation, or experimental data. This equivalence is load-bearing for the practicality argument but remains unsupported.
  2. [Abstract, experimental section] Abstract and experimental section: the proof-of-concept demonstration with a narrowband laser is asserted, yet no methods, raw data, error bars, covert-rate measurements, or adversary-channel characterization are provided, preventing evaluation of whether the results support the two-way covert claims.
minor comments (2)
  1. Notation for bosonic channels and covert capacity expressions should be defined explicitly on first use rather than assumed from prior literature.
  2. Figure captions for any experimental setups or rate plots should include all relevant parameters (e.g., power levels, integration times) to allow reproducibility.

Simulated Author's Rebuttal

2 responses · 0 unresolved

We thank the referee for the detailed review and constructive criticism. We agree that the current manuscript requires substantial additions to substantiate the central claims regarding the correlator receiver and the experimental demonstration. We will revise the paper to include the requested derivations, analyses, data, and characterizations.

read point-by-point responses

  1. Referee: [Abstract, §4] Abstract and §4 (proposal of correlator receiver): the central claim that the correlator-based receiver attains the broadband gain of a quantum light source without precise mode matching is stated without any derivation, performance analysis, comparison to quantum-source baselines, simulation, or experimental data. This equivalence is load-bearing for the practicality argument but remains unsupported.

    Authors: We acknowledge that the proposal for the correlator-based receiver is presented without supporting derivation or quantitative analysis in the current version. In the revised manuscript, we will add a detailed derivation of the receiver's performance, comparisons against quantum-source baselines, simulations of the broadband gain, and analysis showing the absence of mode-matching requirements. This will directly address the load-bearing claim for practicality. revision: yes

  2. Referee: [Abstract, experimental section] Abstract and experimental section: the proof-of-concept demonstration with a narrowband laser is asserted, yet no methods, raw data, error bars, covert-rate measurements, or adversary-channel characterization are provided, preventing evaluation of whether the results support the two-way covert claims.

    Authors: The experimental section currently provides only a high-level description of the proof-of-concept. We will expand it in the revision to include full methods, raw data, error bars, measured covert rates, and characterization of the adversary channel under quantum-capable assumptions, enabling proper evaluation of the two-way covert communication results. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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No circularity: paper contains no equations, derivations, or self-referential reductions

full rationale

The provided abstract and description contain no equations, no claimed derivations, and no mathematical steps that could reduce to inputs by construction. The central claims are an experimental demonstration using a narrowband laser and a proposal for a correlator-based receiver; neither is supported by any derivation chain in the visible text. No self-citations, fitted parameters presented as predictions, or ansatzes are present. This is the expected honest non-finding when a paper offers no formal derivation to inspect.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

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Abstract-only review provides no information on free parameters, axioms, or invented entities.

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