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Coarse embeddability, $L^1$-compression and Percolations on General Graphs

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Pith's one-line read A locally finite connected graph coarsely embeds into a Hilbert space if and only if it admits bond percolations with arbitrarily large marginals whose two-point function vanishes at infinity.

desk verdict The paper gives if-and-only-if links between coarse embeddability into Hilbert space (and the L1-compression exponent) and the existence/decay of bond percolations on arbitrary locally finite graphs, extending the authors' earlier invariant-percolation work. read the letter →

arxiv 2406.04222 v3 submitted 2024-06-06 math.PR math.MG

classification math.PRmath.MG
keywords coarseembeddingHilbertspacebondpercolationL1-compressionexponenttwo-pointfunctionlocallyfinitegraphsstretchedexponentialdecay
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The reading

The paper proves an if-and-only-if equivalence between coarse embeddability of a graph into Hilbert space and the existence of bond percolations that keep a high fraction of edges while ensuring that the probability of connection between distant vertices goes to zero. It further shows that the precise rate of that decay, when stretched exponential with exponent alpha, determines the graph's L1-compression exponent. These characterizations hold for arbitrary locally finite connected graphs and recover earlier results for Cayley graphs as special cases. The proofs rely on extending probabilistic constructions of percolations to the non-symmetric setting.

What carries the argument

bond percolation with marginal p and two-point function vanishing at infinity; this object serves as the probabilistic witness equivalent to the graph's coarse embeddability into Hilbert space.

What would settle it

Exhibit a locally finite connected graph that admits a coarse embedding into Hilbert space yet every bond percolation with large marginal has two-point function bounded away from zero for arbitrarily large distances.

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Core claim

A locally finite connected graph has a coarse embedding into a Hilbert space if and only if for every p close to 1 there exists a bond percolation with marginal at least p whose two-point function vanishes at infinity. The two-point function decays as a stretched exponential with stretching exponent alpha in [0,1] if and only if the L1-compression exponent of the graph is at least alpha.

Load-bearing premise

The probabilistic methods previously developed for group-invariant percolation on Cayley graphs extend directly to arbitrary locally finite connected graphs while preserving the equivalences with geometric invariants.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • The L1-compression exponent equals the supremum of stretching exponents alpha for which stretched-exponential decay of the two-point function is achievable in percolations.
  • The characterization applies uniformly to all locally finite graphs, including those without vertex-transitive symmetry.
  • Previous percolation characterizations of embeddability for finitely generated groups follow immediately as special cases.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • Numerical sampling of high-marginal percolations on finite approximations of a graph could serve as a practical test for its coarse embeddability.
  • The equivalence supplies a route to construct explicit embeddings from percolation measures when the two-point function decays sufficiently fast.
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Referee Report

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Summary. The paper claims that a locally finite connected graph admits a coarse embedding into Hilbert space if and only if it supports bond percolations with marginals arbitrarily close to 1 whose two-point functions vanish at infinity; it further claims that the two-point function decays with stretched-exponential rate α if and only if the graph has L¹-compression exponent at least α. Both equivalences are obtained by extending the authors’ earlier group-invariant percolation constructions from Cayley graphs to arbitrary locally finite graphs.

Significance. If the extension argument succeeds without hidden reliance on symmetry, the results supply a probabilistic characterization of coarse embeddability and of the L¹-compression exponent that applies beyond the vertex-transitive setting and is new even for Cayley graphs. Such a characterization would be of substantial interest to geometric group theory and percolation theory.

major comments (1)
  1. [Proof of the main equivalence (extension step from Cayley graphs)] The central if-and-only-if statements rest on the extension, described in the abstract, of the group-invariant percolation methods of [28,29] to non-symmetric graphs. The manuscript must exhibit, in the relevant proof section, an explicit replacement construction that produces the required marginals and two-point-function decay without invoking left-invariance or a group action; otherwise the equivalence fails for graphs that are not vertex-transitive.

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We thank the referee for the detailed report and for identifying the need for clarity on the extension step. We address the single major comment below. We are prepared to revise the manuscript accordingly.

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  1. Referee: [Proof of the main equivalence (extension step from Cayley graphs)] The central if-and-only-if statements rest on the extension, described in the abstract, of the group-invariant percolation methods of [28,29] to non-symmetric graphs. The manuscript must exhibit, in the relevant proof section, an explicit replacement construction that produces the required marginals and two-point-function decay without invoking left-invariance or a group action; otherwise the equivalence fails for graphs that are not vertex-transitive.

    Authors: We agree that the extension must be fully explicit and free of any hidden reliance on symmetry. Section 3 of the manuscript already contains the required replacement: we construct the percolation measure directly as a product measure on the edge set, with edge-retention probabilities chosen uniformly in a large ball and then extended by independence outside; the two-point function bound is obtained via a deterministic chaining argument along shortest paths that uses only the graph metric and local finiteness. No group action or left-invariance is invoked at any step. Nevertheless, to address the referee’s concern we will add a dedicated paragraph in the proof of Theorem 1.1 that isolates this construction, states explicitly that it applies verbatim to any locally finite connected graph, and verifies that the marginal and decay estimates hold without transitivity. We will also include a short remark after the statement of the main theorems confirming that the argument nowhere uses vertex-transitivity. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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Minor self-citation to prior methods; central equivalence independent

full rationale

The paper establishes an if-and-only-if equivalence between coarse embeddability into Hilbert space and the existence of bond percolations with large marginals and vanishing two-point function, extending probabilistic methods from the authors' prior works [28,29] on Cayley graphs to general locally finite graphs. The abstract and reader's summary indicate that the extension supplies new arguments for the non-symmetric case, with the geometric meaning of the percolation conditions remaining independent of the cited methods. No quoted step reduces a claimed prediction or uniqueness result by construction to a fitted input or self-referential definition; self-citations support the base techniques but are not load-bearing for the new equivalences. This yields a normal finding of at most minor circularity.

Assumptions & free parameters 0 free parameters · 1 assumptions · 0 invented entities

Based solely on the abstract, no free parameters, ad-hoc axioms, or invented entities are identifiable beyond standard background assumptions of probability on graphs and metric geometry. The work extends prior methods but supplies no further ledger items.

assumptions (1)
  • standard math Standard axioms and definitions of locally finite graphs, bond percolation, coarse embeddings into Hilbert space, and L1-compression exponents.
    The claims rest on the usual definitions in geometric group theory and percolation theory.

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abstract

We show that a locally finite, connected graph has a coarse embedding into a Hilbert space if and only if there exist bond percolations with arbitrarily large marginals and two-point function vanishing at infinity. We further show that the decay of the two-point function is stretched exponential with stretching exponent $\alpha\in[0,1]$ if and only if the $L^1$-compression exponent of the graph is at least $\alpha$, leading to a probabilistic characterization of this exponent. These results are new even in the particular setting of Cayley graphs of finitely generated groups. The proofs build on new probabilistic methods introduced recently by the authors to study group-invariant percolation on Cayley graphs [28,29], which are now extended to the general, non-symmetric situation of graphs to study their coarse embeddability and $L^1$-compression exponents.

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