arxiv: 2604.03380 · v2 · submitted 2026-04-03 · 💻 cs.CL

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Noise Steering for Controlled Text Generation: Improving Diversity and Reading-Level Fidelity in Arabic Educational Story Generation

Haziq Mohammad Khalid , Salsabeel Shapsough , Imran Zualkernan

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keywords noise steeringcontrolled text generationArabic educational storiesnarrative diversityreading level fidelitytransformer modelsinference-time perturbationconstrained generation

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Calibrated noise injected into transformer residual streams generates more diverse Arabic educational stories while preserving early-grade reading levels.

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The paper investigates training-free methods to increase variety in stories generated for Arabic early-grade reading assessments, where repetitive plots reduce assessment value. It tests four strategies for adding Gaussian noise to internal model representations and compares them to high-temperature sampling across five small Arabic-centric models. Residual stream noise stands out by raising narrative diversity with little loss in quality or constraint adherence and without pushing reading levels higher. High-temperature sampling often inflates reading difficulty and causes generation collapse on some models. Attention entropy noise injection offers a stable alternative for attention-related perturbations.

Core claim

Residual stream noise injection at inference time improves narrative diversity in constrained Arabic story generation with minimal cost to quality or vocabulary adherence and without elevating reading grade level, outperforming high-temperature sampling which inflates reading levels and triggers collapse on multiple models.

What carries the argument

Residual stream noise injection, which adds calibrated Gaussian perturbations to the hidden states passed through transformer residual connections to steer token selection toward greater variety.

If this is right

Generated assessment stories avoid repetitive plots while staying within target vocabulary and structure limits.
Early-grade reading levels remain stable across all tested Arabic-centric models.
Quality and constraint adherence stay comparable to deterministic baselines.
Attention entropy noise injection recovers quality when direct attention logit noise proves unstable.
The approach requires no retraining and applies directly to existing small models.

Where Pith is reading between the lines

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The same internal perturbation technique could extend to other constrained generation domains such as medical summaries or legal drafting where diversity without level drift matters.
Automated metrics would benefit from periodic human calibration to confirm they track real pedagogical suitability.
Automated per-model noise scale tuning could remove the current manual calibration step.
Testing on non-Arabic languages would reveal whether residual stream noise generalizes beyond the Arabic-centric training distributions.

Load-bearing premise

The noise scales selected for each model and injection site are correctly tuned and the automated diversity and reading-level metrics match what educators would accept as pedagogically valid.

What would settle it

Human Arabic educators rating matched sets of stories from noise steering versus baselines would judge the noise-steered outputs as less diverse or less suitable for early-grade reading.

Figures

Figures reproduced from arXiv: 2604.03380 by Haziq Mohammad Khalid, Imran Zualkernan, Salsabeel Shapsough.

**Figure 2.** Figure 2: Osman readability score (left) and Vendi Score (right) for Baseline, AENI, and L-Res across all five [PITH_FULL_IMAGE:figures/full_fig_p017_2.png] view at source ↗

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Generating diverse, pedagogically valid stories for Arabic early-grade reading assessments requires balancing tight constraints on vocabulary, reading level, and narrative structure against the need to avoid repetitive plots that undermine assessment validity. We investigate noise steering, injecting calibrated Gaussian perturbations into the internal representations of transformer models at inference time, as a training-free diversity method evaluated across five small Arabic-centric language models (7-9B parameters). We compare four injection strategies against high-temperature sampling baselines, measuring diversity, quality, constraint adherence, and reading grade level. Residual stream noise consistently improves narrative diversity with minimal quality or constraint cost and preserves early-grade reading level across all Arabic-centric models. Attention entropy noise injection (AENI) stabilizes the otherwise unreliable attention-logit noise while recovering quality. High-temperature sampling inflates reading grade level and causes catastrophic collapse on several models. We find internal representation-level perturbation to be a more suitable diversity strategy than output-level stochasticity for constrained educational content generation.

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Residual-stream noise at inference lifts diversity in constrained Arabic story generation while keeping early-grade reading levels intact, and it beats high-temperature sampling.

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The main takeaway is that adding calibrated Gaussian noise to the residual stream during inference gives a training-free way to increase narrative variety in Arabic educational stories without pushing the reading level higher or hurting overall quality much. It works across the five small Arabic-centric models they tested and holds up better than just raising temperature, which inflates grade level and causes collapse on several runs. Attention-entropy noise helps stabilize attention-based injection when the plain logit version is flaky. That combination is the concrete new piece: applying these specific internal perturbation sites to tightly constrained educational generation in Arabic rather than open-ended text.

Referee Report

2 major / 2 minor

Summary. The paper proposes noise steering—injecting calibrated Gaussian perturbations into transformer residual streams or attention logits at inference time—as a training-free method to increase narrative diversity in Arabic educational story generation while preserving vocabulary constraints, narrative structure, and early-grade reading levels. It evaluates four injection strategies (including residual-stream noise and attention-entropy noise injection) against high-temperature sampling baselines across five 7-9B Arabic-centric models, reporting that residual-stream noise yields consistent diversity gains with minimal degradation in quality or constraint adherence and without inflating reading grade level, whereas high-temperature sampling causes grade-level inflation and collapse on multiple models.

Significance. If the empirical results hold under rigorous validation, the work supplies a practical, training-free intervention for controlled generation in low-resource languages that directly addresses a real pedagogical need: producing varied yet level-appropriate assessment stories without repetitive plots. The finding that internal-representation perturbations outperform output-level stochasticity for constraint fidelity is potentially reusable beyond Arabic and could reduce reliance on expensive fine-tuning for educational content.

major comments (2)

[Evaluation / Experiments] Evaluation section (and abstract claim of 'consistently improves... with minimal quality or constraint cost'): the manuscript relies exclusively on automated metrics for diversity, quality, constraint adherence, and reading-grade estimation. No human validation, inter-annotator agreement, or correlation study with expert pedagogical judgments is reported, leaving open whether the metrics capture narrative coherence, cultural appropriateness, or actual assessment utility for early-grade Arabic readers. This assumption is load-bearing for the central claim.
[Method / Experiments] Experimental details (noise-scale selection and injection sites): the paper states that noise scales are 'calibrated' per model and site, yet provides no systematic ablation or validation procedure showing how these scales were chosen or why they generalize across the five models. Without this, the reported robustness of residual-stream noise cannot be assessed for sensitivity to hyper-parameter choice.

minor comments (2)

[Tables] Table captions and metric definitions should explicitly state the exact formulations (e.g., which diversity metric, which readability formula) and any Arabic-specific adaptations.
[Method] The abstract mentions 'four injection strategies' but the method section should clarify the precise mapping to residual-stream, attention-logit, and AENI variants with equations for the perturbation.

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We thank the referee for the constructive feedback. We address each major comment below with clarifications and commit to revisions that strengthen transparency and reproducibility without altering the core empirical findings.

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Referee: [Evaluation / Experiments] Evaluation section (and abstract claim of 'consistently improves... with minimal quality or constraint cost'): the manuscript relies exclusively on automated metrics for diversity, quality, constraint adherence, and reading-grade estimation. No human validation, inter-annotator agreement, or correlation study with expert pedagogical judgments is reported, leaving open whether the metrics capture narrative coherence, cultural appropriateness, or actual assessment utility for early-grade Arabic readers. This assumption is load-bearing for the central claim.

Authors: We acknowledge that the evaluation relies solely on automated metrics, which directly quantify the targeted aspects (n-gram diversity, perplexity-based quality, vocabulary overlap for constraints, and formula-based reading level). These metrics are standard in the field and have documented correlations with human judgments in prior Arabic and educational text studies. We agree that direct human validation by pedagogical experts would further support claims of assessment utility. In revision we will expand the evaluation section with explicit justification of metric validity citing relevant literature, add a dedicated limitations subsection noting the absence of human annotation in this work, and outline directions for future expert evaluation. This provides the requested transparency on assumptions. revision: partial
Referee: [Method / Experiments] Experimental details (noise-scale selection and injection sites): the paper states that noise scales are 'calibrated' per model and site, yet provides no systematic ablation or validation procedure showing how these scales were chosen or why they generalize across the five models. Without this, the reported robustness of residual-stream noise cannot be assessed for sensitivity to hyper-parameter choice.

Authors: We agree that the calibration procedure requires fuller documentation for reproducibility. Scales were chosen via grid search over a held-out validation set of stories, optimizing a composite objective of diversity gain versus constraint preservation (reading level stability and vocabulary adherence). In the revised manuscript we will insert a new subsection detailing the search ranges, objective function, selected values per model and site, and cross-model generalization results. This will enable readers to evaluate sensitivity to these choices. revision: yes

Circularity Check

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full rationale

The paper is an empirical comparison of inference-time noise injection strategies across Arabic language models, reporting measured outcomes on diversity, quality, constraint adherence, and reading level metrics. No mathematical derivations, equations, or predictions are presented that reduce by construction to fitted parameters, self-definitions, or self-citation chains. The central claims rest on experimental results rather than any load-bearing step that renames inputs as outputs or imports uniqueness via author prior work. This is the expected non-finding for a purely experimental methods paper with no derivation chain.

Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger

1 free parameters · 1 axioms · 0 invented entities

The central claim rests on standard transformer architecture assumptions plus empirical calibration of noise magnitude; no new entities are postulated.

free parameters (1)

noise scale per injection site
Gaussian perturbation variance is described as calibrated but the exact values or selection procedure are not stated in the abstract.

axioms (1)

domain assumption Perturbing internal representations at inference time does not destroy coherence or constraint adherence in transformer decoders.
Invoked to justify noise steering as a viable diversity method.

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