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Optimising for Flourishing: Flourishing Metrics and Return on Flourishing as Success Criteria for Artificial Intelligence and Post-AGI Economic Systems

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Pith's one-line read AI should be judged by its contribution to human flourishing, not by capability or financial return, and this paper formalizes flourishing as a measurable, dynamic system variable with a companion decision metric, Return on Flourishing…

desk verdict A genuinely new synthesis of flourishing measurement and ROI-style evaluation for AI, but the central RoF formula is a before-after ratio, not the counterfactual estimator the prose promises—a fixable but load-bearing flaw. read the letter →

arxiv 2608.00151 v2 pith:UGLY6TMV submitted 2026-07-31 cs.CY cs.AIecon.TH

Keyun Ruan , Jonathan D. Teubner , John M. Bremen This is my paper · ORCID
classification cs.CYcs.AIecon.TH
keywords humanflourishingartificialintelligenceReturnonAIgovernancewell-beingmeasurementobjectivefunctionspost-AGIeconomicsalignment
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The reading

This paper argues that the criteria currently used to judge AI systems — capability, safety, adoption, engagement, efficiency, productivity, and financial return — are necessary but insufficient, because none of them establishes whether increasingly powerful systems improve or degrade human and planetary well-being. Its central claim is that flourishing should be the primary success criterion for AI, for the global race to build it, and for the post-AGI economy, and that the objective functions chosen today will determine the trajectory of that economy. To make the claim actionable, it proposes Flourishing Metrics, a six-dimension measurement framework, and Return on Flourishing (RoF), a counterfactual ratio of flourishing gained per unit of resources, risk, and opportunity cost. A sympathetic reader would care because the paper turns a philosophical ideal into a testable decision architecture: if it works, evaluations of AI would change from asking what systems can produce to asking for whom, at what cost, and with what effect on the conditions of a good life.

What carries the argument

The load-bearing object is the Flourishing State Vector, $F_i = f(PW_i, EW_i, FW_i, RW_i, SW_i, PLW_i)$, which defines a person's flourishing as a point in a six-dimensional space covering physical, emotional, financial, relational, spiritual, and planetary well-being. On top of it sit three constructions: the Aggregate Flourishing Function $F = \sum_{i=1}^{N} \omega_i F_i$ with distribution-sensitive weights $\omega_i$; the dynamic law $F_{t+1} = F_t + \Delta F(AI_t, I_t, E_t)$, which lets AI interventions be scored by their effect on flourishing trajectories; and the central identity Return on Flourishing, $\mathrm{RoF} = (F_{t+1} - F_t)/C_t$, which redefines value creation as flourishing gained per unit of invested resources. The normative weight is carried by five non-compensatory safeguards: a positive aggregate RoF is necessary but not sufficient, because no dimension may fall below a pre-agreed threshold, no affected stakeholder group may suffer unacceptable loss, the result must be robust to alternative weights and assumptions, and the intervention must beat feasible alternatives. These pieces convert flourishing from a philosophical ideal into a measurable, optimizable system variable.

What would settle it

Run the paper's own proposed field test: a staggered twelve-month rollout of an AI system across comparable business units with pre-deployment baselines and later-adopting units as comparison groups, measuring all six flourishing dimensions and aggregate RoF. The central claim would be undercut if the framework's decision rules approved interventions that independent, validated survey measures showed to have degraded relational or spiritual well-being, or if the behavioural proxies (sickness absence, civic participation, isolation) systematically diverged from the subjective measures they are meant to track — demonstrating that flourishing cannot yet be operationalized at the scale the architecture requires.

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Extended reading notes

Core claim

The paper's central discovery is a formal framing: flourishing can be treated as a dynamic system variable and embedded directly into the objective functions of AI and post-AGI economic systems. Flourishing is defined for each entity as a state vector over six interdependent dimensions — physical, emotional, financial, relational, spiritual, and planetary well-being — aggregated across people as $F = \sum_{i=1}^{N} \omega_i F_i$, evolving as $F_{t+1} = F_t + \Delta F(AI_t, I_t, E_t)$, and evaluated through Return on Flourishing, $\mathrm{RoF} = (F_{t+1} - F_t)/C_t$. The claim is that existing metrics optimize intermediate variables, and because AI scales whatever objective it is given, optimizing narrow proxies amplifies misspecification; flourishing-centred optimisation $R = \alpha\Pi + \beta F$ with $\beta \to 1$ under abundance corrects this. The authors are explicit that RoF is not a ready-made universal reward function but a value-accounting and decision architecture requiring democratic specification, empirical calibration, independent validation, and protection against unacceptable losses in any dimension or stakeholder group.

Load-bearing premise

Flourishing can be captured as a weighted sum of measurable dimensions across people, $F = \sum \omega_i F_i$, with weights set democratically; the paper itself states that the weights are not empirically calibrated and the framework has not been validated in a field trial or randomised evaluation.

Editorial extensions

If this is right

  • If adopted, AI evaluation would shift from capability and engagement benchmarks to measured changes in six flourishing dimensions, making well-being an explicit design target rather than an assumed byproduct.
  • RoF supplies an investment rule: scale an AI intervention only when counterfactual aggregate RoF is positive and no dimension or stakeholder group falls below a pre-agreed threshold.
  • Persistent declines in relational and spiritual well-being — the two dimensions the paper singles out as most neglected — would function as early warning signals of systemic misalignment, visible long before catastrophic technical failures.
  • In the post-AGI abundance scenario the proposed objective $R = \alpha\Pi + \beta F$ drives $\beta \to 1$, so flourishing becomes the dominant optimization target and production becomes a means rather than an end.
  • Firm-level RoF pilots would turn AI adoption from a decision about whether to automate into a participatory process for redesigning work, distributing gains, and deciding which human capacities to preserve.

Reading between the lines

Editorial extensions of the paper, not claims the author makes directly.

  • The counterfactual cost-benefit logic of RoF extends beyond AI to any technology that reshapes daily life — social platforms, synthetic biology, immersive media — though the paper limits itself to AI and post-AGI economics.
  • The democratic-specification requirement implies that weighting regimes will differ across communities, so RoF comparisons are meaningful only within a shared weighting regime; the paper acknowledges this but leaves the resolution to empirical calibration.
  • If flourishing reporting entered corporate non-financial disclosure, RoF could generate market pressure toward human-centred AI deployment without new regulation — an institutional implication the paper gestures at but does not develop.
  • The non-compensatory safeguards effectively make RoF a lexicographic or threshold-constrained decision rule rather than a scalar objective, which may sit uneasily with the maximizing framework it is embedded into — a tension the paper does not resolve.
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Referee Report

3 major / 5 minor

Summary. The paper argues that AI and post-AGI economic systems should be evaluated and optimized not by capability, safety, or narrow proxies such as engagement and financial return, but by their measurable contribution to human and planetary flourishing. It proposes Flourishing Metrics, a multidimensional framework spanning physical, emotional, financial, relational, spiritual, and planetary well-being, and Return on Flourishing (RoF), defined as the change in aggregate flourishing per unit of invested resources. The paper formalizes flourishing as an aggregate state variable, suggests embedding flourishing into AI objective functions, and describes non-compensatory safeguards and pilot designs for workplace AI deployment. It explicitly positions RoF as a value-accounting and decision architecture rather than a ready-made reward function, and repeatedly disclaims empirical calibration, field validation, and democratic specification as open problems.

Significance. If the framework were operationalized, it would offer a genuinely broader evaluative basis for AI governance than existing capability- and safety-centered approaches, and the synthesis of flourishing science, welfare economics, and AI assurance literatures is competent and well motivated. The paper is honest about its limitations: it states in Section 2 that weights are not empirically calibrated and no field trial has been run, and it does not claim that RoF is ready for autonomous deployment. The conceptual argument that current proxy objectives are misspecified relative to human well-being is plausible and timely. However, the central formal contribution—RoF—has a definitional gap between its stated counterfactual logic and its actual equation, which undermines the claim that RoF can serve as a rigorous decision architecture even as a proposal.

major comments (3)
  1. [Section 5.4 (Eq. RoF = ΔF/C) vs Sections 5.3, 5.8, and Abstract] The formal definition of RoF is not a counterfactual measure. Equation (5.4) defines RoF = (F_{t+1} − F_t)/C_t, while Section 5.3 specifies F_{t+1} = F_t + ΔF(AI_t, I_t, E_t), so the change ΔF includes institutional and environmental drivers that are not attributable to the intervention. The Abstract and Section 5.8 explicitly claim that RoF evaluates the counterfactual contribution of an intervention relative to its opportunity costs. These commitments are internally inconsistent: any implementation following the stated formula will credit the intervention with background gains and will not net out foregone alternatives. The pilot design in Section 7.1 uses staggered rollout and comparison units, which would estimate a difference-in-differences effect, but that design is not represented in the formal definition. This is load-bearing because RoF is the paper's central quantitative contribution; I recommend either redefining RoF as (F_t^treatment − F_t^counterfactual)/C_t with an explicit identification strategy, or explicitly limiting RoF to a descriptive before-after ratio and removing the counterfactual claims.
  2. [Section 5.2 (aggregate flourishing function) and Section 2 (limitations)] The formalization of aggregate flourishing F = Σ ω_i F_i and the subsequent RoF formula are stated as exact equations, but the weights ω_i and ω_j are acknowledged in Section 2 as not empirically calibrated, and the framework is acknowledged as not validated. This gap is not, by itself, fatal because the paper frames the equations as normative representations. However, as written, the equations carry a spurious precision: no measurement basis, scale, or identification of F_i or ΔF is given, so RoF remains a placeholder rather than a defined quantity. I recommend stating explicitly that the formal equations are schematic, and adding a section that specifies the minimal data and estimation requirements needed to instantiate F, ΔF, and C in a pilot, thereby connecting the formal notation to the Section 7.1 design.
  3. [Section 5.9 (decision rules)] The non-compensatory safeguards are clear as normative principles, but they are not integrated with the formal RoF definition. Condition (4) requires robustness to 'attribution assumptions', yet the RoF formula in Section 5.4 contains no attribution component; condition (5) requires comparison with feasible alternatives, which again presupposes a counterfactual that the equation does not provide. The gap between the formal definition and the safeguards means that a decision procedure following Sections 5.4 and 5.9 cannot be implemented as a coherent algorithm. I recommend formalizing the safeguards as constraints on the counterfactual estimator, or explicitly reducing the formal claims to a checklist of desirable properties for a future estimator.
minor comments (5)
  1. [Title page] The title appears inconsistently as 'Optimizing for Flourishing' and 'Optimising for Flourishing'; please standardize.
  2. [Section 4.2, Table 1 note] The citation '(Author(s) 2025)' is a placeholder for double-anonymous review; it should be resolved or marked for replacement before publication.
  3. [Sections 5.2 and 5.5] The notation is confusing: ω_i is used for population weights in F = Σω_i F_i, and then ω_j for dimension weights in the expanded form; the relationship between these two sets of weights is not defined. Also, in Section 5.5 the limit 'β → 1' is not accompanied by any normalization of F relative to Π, so its meaning is ambiguous.
  4. [Throughout Section 5] The equations are not numbered, which makes it difficult for the reader to refer to specific formulas; I recommend numbering all display equations.
  5. [Section 7.1] The staggered rollout is described as using 'later-adopting units as provisional comparison groups', but the text does not specify how these comparison groups enter the RoF calculation under the Section 5.4 definition; this strengthens the need for a formal counterfactual estimator.

Circularity Check

0 steps flagged · score 2.0 of 10

No significant circularity: the formal framework is self-contained, no fitted parameter is relabelled as a prediction, and the self-citations present are minor and non-load-bearing.

full rationale

Walking the derivation chain (six dimensions -> F_i -> aggregate F -> dynamic F_{t+1} -> RoF -> decision safeguards), no step reduces an output to an input by definition. The flourishing state vector is anchored in external work (VanderWeele 2017; VanderWeele et al. 2025), and the aggregate F = sum omega_i F_i is an explicit normative aggregation with weights explicitly left to democratic and empirical specification, not fitted in the paper. RoF is explicitly introduced as a ratio Delta F / C, and the paper states that 'the proposed equations are therefore normative and analytical representations rather than empirically estimated models' and that 'the proposed weights are not empirically calibrated' and 'the framework has not yet been validated through a field trial or randomised evaluation.' This eliminates fitted-input-called-prediction circularity. The only self-citations are (i) VanderWeele and Teubner (2026) used to say the VanderWeele framework has recently been proposed for AI and to recommend Social Flourishing Framework indicators, and (ii) an anonymized '(Author(s) 2025)' reference for the extensible-taxonomy intention. These are background support, not the justification for the formal equations; deleting them would not alter any derivation. The skeptic's counterfactual concern about RoF = (F_{t+1}-F_t)/C_t is a real internal-validity gap, but it is not a circularity: the formula is not derived from the counterfactual claim, and no parameter is fitted to make the two coincide. Under the evidentiary rule requiring a quoted reduction, no circular step can be certified; score 2 reflects only minor non-load-bearing self-citation.

Assumptions & free parameters 3 free parameters · 4 assumptions · 2 invented entities

The central framework rests on the uncalibrated aggregation of six well-being dimensions into a single scalar F, and on the assumption that flourishing can be measured and optimized in practice. No free parameters are fitted to data, but the dimension and population weights remain external inputs that the framework does not specify.

free parameters (3)
  • Dimension weights ω_j
    Used in the Aggregate Flourishing Function (Section 5.2) to combine six well-being dimensions; no values are proposed.
  • Population weights ω_i
    Equity weighting across individuals in the aggregate flourishing function; left unspecified.
  • Objective-function weights α and β
    In Section 5.5 these weight profit versus flourishing in the proposed AI objective R = αΠ + βF; no values are given.
assumptions (4)
  • domain assumption Human flourishing is a multidimensional latent state composed of six interdependent dimensions (physical, emotional, financial, relational, spiritual, planetary).
    Section 5.1 defines F_i as a function of these six; the choice is justified by prior literature, not by new evidence.
  • domain assumption Validated subjective measures can be combined with behavioral, administrative, and environmental indicators to track flourishing in real time.
    Section 4.2 assumes such data infrastructures exist and are scalable; no pilot evidence is supplied.
  • domain assumption Well-being is positively associated with productivity and organizational performance, so flourishing complements financial return.
    Section 5.4 relies on De Neve and Oswald 2012 for this empirical connection.
  • ad hoc to paper AI systems can be optimized with respect to a flourishing objective, i.e., flourishing is a computable objective function.
    Section 5.5 proposes embedding F into objective functions; this presupposes tractable measurement and optimization.
invented entities (2)
  • Return on Flourishing (RoF)
    purpose: A ratio of change in aggregate flourishing to resources invested, used to evaluate AI systems and policies.
    Defined in Section 5.4 as ΔF/C; no empirical study or benchmark supports its practical use yet.
  • Flourishing State Vector
    purpose: A mathematical representation of an individual's status across six well-being dimensions.
    Introduced in Section 5.1 as F_i = f(PW_i, EW_i, FW_i, RW_i, SW_i, PLW_i); it is a formal tool, not a measured quantity.

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Current evaluation frameworks for artificial intelligence focus mainly on capability, safety, and proxies such as adoption, engagement, efficiency, productivity, and financial return. These criteria are necessary but insufficient because they do not establish whether increasingly powerful systems improve or degrade human and planetary well-being. Through an integrative conceptual synthesis, we argue that human flourishing should serve as a primary success criterion for artificial intelligence, the global race to develop increasingly capable AI systems, and prospective post-AGI economic systems. We make three contributions. First, Flourishing Metrics provides an extensible framework spanning physical, emotional, financial, relational, spiritual, and planetary well-being, combining validated subjective measures with representative behavioural, organisational, community, and environmental indicators. Second, Return on Flourishing (RoF) extends return on investment by evaluating the counterfactual contribution of interventions, policies, and AI systems to flourishing relative to their resources, risks, and opportunity costs. Third, we develop distribution-sensitive safeguards and show how RoF could guide AI-enabled work redesign, institutional appraisal, assurance, and post-deployment monitoring through business pilots. We formalise flourishing as a dynamic system variable while emphasising the need for democratic specification, empirical calibration, independent validation, and protection against unacceptable losses within particular dimensions or stakeholder groups. RoF is proposed not as a universal reward function, but as a value-accounting and decision architecture for assessing whether intelligence, automation, and economic transformation generate durable human and planetary progress.

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