A BART-based approach with hierarchical strategy for Vietnamese abstractive multi-document summarization
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A BART-based hierarchical approach using golden-summary-driven document shortening improves Vietnamese multi-document abstractive summarization.
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Core claim
The authors establish that their BART-based model with a hierarchical strategy, where documents are shortened in a manner driven by the golden summary, reaches a ROUGE2-F1 score of 0.2468 on the VLSP public test set while generating fluent and concise summaries. They further show that augmenting the dataset with external sources significantly increases the available training data for this task.
What carries the argument
The hierarchical approach of condensing each document before aggregation and summarization, with the condensation step guided by the golden summary to ensure relevance.
Load-bearing premise
The document shortening strategy assumes that golden reference summaries are available at training time to select which content to keep.
What would settle it
A controlled experiment where the model is trained and tested using only automatically generated or no-reference shortening and the ROUGE2-F1 score is compared to the reported value.
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In this technical report, we focus on solving the challenge of Vietnamese multi-document abstractive summarization, introduced in the International Workshop on Vietnamese Language and Speech Processing (VLSP) 2022. We choose to follow the popular hierarchical approach, i.e. condensing each document followed by aggregation and summarization. We propose a novel yet simple strategy to shorten documents that is driven by the golden summary, thus ensuring high correlation between stages of the hierarchical approach. Our method achieves a ROUGE2-F1 score of 0.2468 on the VLSP's public test set, and can produce fluent and concise summaries. Additionally, we utilize external sources for extra data, which greatly enhances the quantity of data for Vietnamese multi-document summarization. The additional data is made available for the community.
Editorial analysis
A structured set of objections, weighed in public.
Referee Report
Summary. The paper proposes a hierarchical BART-based approach for Vietnamese abstractive multi-document summarization. It introduces a novel strategy to shorten documents driven by the golden summary to ensure high correlation between the condensation and aggregation stages. The method achieves a ROUGE2-F1 score of 0.2468 on the VLSP 2022 public test set and releases additional data from external sources for the community.
Significance. If the reported performance holds without reference leakage in the pipeline, this work provides a practical method and additional resources for Vietnamese MDS, which is an under-resourced area. The hierarchical approach is standard, but the specific shortening strategy could be a contribution if properly validated. However, the absence of baselines, ablations, and detailed training information makes it difficult to assess the significance of the result.
major comments (2)
- [Proposed Method] The document-shortening strategy driven by the golden summary (described in the hierarchical approach section) requires reference summaries at training time. This risks introducing leakage into the condensed documents used for the second-stage BART aggregator, as the shortening enforces correlation using information unavailable at inference. The central ROUGE2-F1 claim of 0.2468 depends on this construction, which may not generalize to standard settings without references.
- [Experiments] No baselines, ablation studies, error analysis, or comparisons to other methods are reported despite the claim of effectiveness for the hierarchical strategy. Without these, the ROUGE2-F1 score of 0.2468 cannot be contextualized and the contribution of the proposed shortening method remains unverifiable.
minor comments (1)
- The abstract states that external sources are used for extra data but provides no details on collection, filtering, or how the additional data is integrated into training.
Simulated Author's Rebuttal
We thank the referee for the constructive feedback on our technical report. We address each major comment below and commit to revisions that clarify the method and strengthen the experimental section.
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Referee: [Proposed Method] The document-shortening strategy driven by the golden summary (described in the hierarchical approach section) requires reference summaries at training time. This risks introducing leakage into the condensed documents used for the second-stage BART aggregator, as the shortening enforces correlation using information unavailable at inference. The central ROUGE2-F1 claim of 0.2468 depends on this construction, which may not generalize to standard settings without references.
Authors: We acknowledge the concern regarding potential reference leakage. The golden-summary-driven shortening is used only at training time to construct condensed documents that exhibit high overlap with the target summaries, thereby providing stronger supervision signals for the second-stage aggregator. At inference, document shortening is performed in a reference-free manner using the first-stage BART model itself to select and condense content. We agree that the original manuscript does not sufficiently distinguish these phases or validate the inference procedure. In revision we will expand the method section with an explicit description of the reference-free inference pipeline and report additional ROUGE scores obtained under that setting to demonstrate generalization. revision: yes
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Referee: [Experiments] No baselines, ablation studies, error analysis, or comparisons to other methods are reported despite the claim of effectiveness for the hierarchical strategy. Without these, the ROUGE2-F1 score of 0.2468 cannot be contextualized and the contribution of the proposed shortening method remains unverifiable.
Authors: We agree that the lack of baselines and ablations limits the ability to assess the contribution of the shortening strategy. The revised manuscript will include (i) a baseline hierarchical BART system without the proposed shortening, (ii) ablation results isolating the effect of golden-summary-driven shortening, and (iii) an error analysis of generated summaries. Where possible we will also compare against other published Vietnamese summarization approaches. revision: yes
Circularity Check
Empirical ROUGE score from hierarchical BART pipeline with no self-referential derivation
full rationale
The paper reports an empirical test-set ROUGE2-F1 of 0.2468 obtained by training and evaluating a BART-based hierarchical model on the VLSP dataset. The shortening strategy is a training-time preprocessing step that uses reference summaries to select sentences; the final reported metric is measured on held-out test documents without access to those references. No equations, fitted parameters renamed as predictions, or self-citation chains appear in the derivation. The result is therefore a standard empirical measurement rather than a quantity forced by construction from the paper's own inputs.
Axiom & Free-Parameter Ledger
axioms (2)
- domain assumption BART can be effectively fine-tuned for abstractive summarization in Vietnamese
- domain assumption Hierarchical condensation followed by aggregation produces better multi-document summaries than direct methods
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